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by Levii

person ni9htdreame12
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYY!?!?!??!?!? did she have to be pregnant with spike\'s baby?!?!?!? y not jet\'s!?!?!? *crying*
person ni9htdreame12
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god please let this be a faye/spike paring.
person BlueVixen2071
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! LoL, I almost started crying in that scene whenever Vicious came back and Sith was like, \"She\'s dead, isn\'t she?\" That so sso sad! And Sith actually showed ::gasp:: EMOTION! LoL Wow, that was SO cool! I really liked the whole concept of \'Dragons never die...they fade away\'. Aww, she\'s finally free! =*) Poor Jet, though...bet that was hard. =*( I know what it\'s like to lose a friend. ;_; I can\'t believe it\'s over! I won\'t LET it be over! LoL Maybe you could possible write ANOTHER fic??? ^_^ ::nudges you:: Until then....stay cool and KEEP WRITING!!! ^,~
person BlueVixen2071
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no...Rain\'s going 2 DIE, isn\'t she?! >.< Just when I start getting attached 2 hLoL.LoL....seems like a suicide mission, yet I don\'t know yet. Hmmm Wow, you know you\'re a good author when ya don\'t know what\'s coming! Make the last chapter a blast to read, which I\'m sure you will! ^,~
person BlueVixen2071
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAH!!! =*( I\'m sick, so this is DOUBLE the bad news! Only 2 chappies left??? ::sniffles:: And I was REALLY starting 2 enjoy this & look forward to its update, too! >.< ::sighs:: And about this chapter, u ask? Two words for ya....in-credible. ^_~ heehee
person BlueVixen2071
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no, it\'s almost OVER?!!! ::sobs:: And there\'s going 2 be a twisted surprise?!! AGGH!! LoL I don\'t know whether it\'s a good one or a bad one, so hopefully good! >.< LoL Does Faye end up giving birth to an alien?! LoL, don\'t ask, I just had a donut, eheh. -.-\' Maybe THAT\'S why I wrote that, lmfao. Wow, I\'m HYPER! And EXCITED! Cuz I made colorguard againI haI have singing tryouts 2morrow, and your fic is wonderful, and AAAAAAAAAAAH! LoL Great job! UPDATE!!!!! ^,~
person bluevixen2071 eh -.-\'
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
P.S. That\'s so weird, but kewl, cuz I also named a baby Aurora for my Bebop fic! ^^ Except it was Faye\'s baby & constantly reminded her of Spike insteada Rain\'s constantly reminding Sith of Vicious, so yeaah, heh. It\'s on here, somewhere....don\'t feel like ing ing for it....I don\'t even remember what it\'s about! lmfao I think it\'s called....uhhh....\"The Shadows of Death\"...yeah, that was it! =P LoL I\'ll leave u in peace now, hahaha.
person BlueVixen2071
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! I get a hug and a cookie! =P rotfl I need that stuff, too...I am SO tired from constant colorguard/singing practice. -.-\' Oiyee. LoL Anywhos, this is SO kewl! ^^ It seems like it\'s gonna be really long, so yay! Triple the goodness! ^_^ I like Rain now that I seem to connect with her on a more personal level now that we can actually see into her thoughts and how she feels. She seems real tough, and I admire that in female characters. Mayhat\hat\'s why I like Faye and Electra so much...they\'re both tough and don\'t take any crap. I also like Sith a whole lot, but she\'s not your character, so I guess that you don\'t care about that, hahaha. I think that it would make sense to have Spike be a bit more aloof around Faye...that is, if he\'s all upset and unsure of how to proceed about her pregnancy. I mean, they just seemed more like lukewarm friends than people who had had a one night stand, LoL. You know what I mean? I don\'t think that you portrayed anything wrong, but I just think that it would make a tad more sense to have slight tension between them and stuff. Other than that, I salute you for another job well done! ^,~
person BlueVixen2071 *wut a surprise, eh? lol
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hey, hey! ^^ Veeeery gewd! LoL Your fic & Shadow are both really kewl! They intertwine SO well, & I\'m just like...WOW! The only fics that I\'ve EVER fully read that have OCs in them, so good 4 u! =P You\'ve accomplished something that little do....ATTAINING MY INTEREST AND ACTUALLY KEEPING IT!!!!!!! Update asap! ^,~
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, oh, man. You just get better and better. I love the way Eve/Rain is fleshing out. She seems more solid in some ways, and touchable... or untouchable, as the case may be. You write Sith exceptionally well, and I love it. As someone I know said it, so good it should be sinful. *winks and laughs* I wait for your next installment with baited breath. Whee! I give reviews and cookies! *hands Levii a huge cookie*
Much Luv, keep writin!
Natakamani

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