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Hihi~ I think there's some problem with uploading of chapter 1? Because I can only see the disclaimer, but not the actual chapter. I can see chapter 2 fine though.

Could you upload chapter one again? >.< I really want to read it ~

*goes to read chapter two*

Hey girl,

Just thought I\'d let you know that you don\'t have Chapter Four up here. It has Chapter Three, then skips to Five. I had to grab it off of fanfiction.net for the Battousai And Kaoru Archives upload. :)

You know I totally love this Fanfic right? And I don\'t usually like AR\'s!

Hugs,
PD

Don\'t Worry...Ninja do use Swords! At least in The Legend of the Five Rings RPG they do. I made a Ninja once that used it as her primary weapon, She even had a how lotta poisons on her person at all times and had a neat system where she knew what each pioson was in each vial so she could quickly apply some to her blade and attack. Hehe She also had many cover names if she was ever in a possition where she had to disclose her name. And, (as ninja arn\'t supposed to exsist) she was often seen wondering with her companions dressed as a Geisha! hehe. Well any way, this is a wonderful story so far, even if at sometimes I get lots and don\'t know whats going on or why, (like in the begining after Yahiko hit Kaoru, i didn\'t know it was kenshin kissing her till like the next chapter)

Wow. That was...wow. I thought it was really happening. ^_^ Poor Kaoru. Wanting to jump Kenshin's bone and wanting to be a proper lady. Must be tough. Loved the lime.

Ah, I am glad you started updating this again. I look forward to reading more! Thank you!

Hi there, I just finished reading your story. I like it. I\'m a little confused, like what happened with Yahiko, wasn\'t he captured? Maybe I missed that part. I believe in giving actual reviews, this isn\'t a flame, I swear, I\'m just trying to be helpful. Try fleshing the story out a bit. ot cot confused with the scene changes. Kaoru and Kenshin are kissing, but that\'s it, right? And Aoshi and Misao, you skipped a lot that it was difficult to follow. The story is great. I definitely understand what you\'re doing with it, I see the AU, but the story seems muddled and not quite clear sometimes. Like Sano going from kitchen raider to friend that every one knows. I like what you\'re doing with it though and I\'m looking forward to reading the next chapter.

If you\'d like, email me at queen_of_insanity@hotmail.com or EditorDee@writing.com, I would be willing to give you a more fleshed out review.

I love your story, keep it up!

Sorry this kind of went on a little longer than I had first planned..... ^^;;

(Laughing manically) That was great!!! Keep \'em coming!!!

OH MY GOODNESS! This was the one on ff.net that I loved, and i was stuck on this very same chp and you STILL haven\'t updated, geez geez geez girl? what up? lol

OHHHHHHHHHH! Please, please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!! Must have more lime/lemon!!! Can\'t help...it. I don\'t think I\'l be able to go to sleep tonight. To many visions of Kenshin going through my head!!! Pleeeeeease update soon, Sincerely, loyal fan.

I love it! I love it! Too Short! Toooo Shoort! More! Please! Pwetty Pweeese!!!!!!!!!!! With sugar on top?!