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for Bleed American

by Switchblade003

person The Laughing Man
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful. You did an amazing job keeping Farfarello in character yet showing a more open emotionl side to him. Though I hesitate to use the word 'emotional', it doesn't seem to quite fit in the ways it normally does. I really hope you write a sequel, it really is a superb story.
person Mana
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just.... unf! I loved every bit of it. This is my favorite pairing and this was very well written! It was sweet and made me feel all warm and content and... gah! Farfarello's character was great and I loved Schu comments on his logic and state of mind. You managed to make Farfarello sweet yet never let us forget that dangerous edge to him. Honestly, even in the sweeter moments, you still had the feeling that Farfarello might go off at any moment and it was like... an unspoken threat hanging over our heads. Mmm, continuation of this would be wonderful!
person Sexxi Twisted Angel
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By Gods...YES I want a sequel...very good in its breakdown of what Farf thinks, and how Schu responds. :D
person Liannabob
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darling, I loved it! Very intelligent, very well thought out. Your characterization was brilliant. It's obvious some effort went into this fic. Please, please keep writing!
person melanie
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn. This is now one of my favorite SchuxFar stories! I like it because... well, it\'s hard to say actually, but it kinda gave me a good feeling. It wasn\'t depressing, and it wasn\'t gory (although there was a lot of blood) like many SchuxFar fics. At. At least the serious ones, I mean. And it\'s not bad if a good fic is depressing, but your style is really refreshing and optimistic, which means I can go to bed happy now. Yay ^_^
That\'s also the reason why I sound so brain-dead, I\'m REALLY tired. Anyways, if you\'ve written more WK fics than the 2 on adultff or if you finish another one, please let me know! I\'ll definitely review and leave constructive criticism (although there really isn\'t anything I can criticize in this fic).
person melanie again
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hhmmphh, I forgot: I would kill for a sequel! SEQUEL, please!
person TysoyoKalli
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was.. just... wow. Though the title doesn\'t go very well, I love your take on Farfarello, and you did a perfect SchuxFarf, which not many poeple can pull off. This was damn near perfect. Rated top! ^_^; I don\'t think a sequel wouold be needed, but it would be nice. I enjoyed reading this, alot!


Forever the INfamous Kalli
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, if there\'s more, let us have it. Please! Your portrayal of Farfarello makes me want to hug my monitor... or something. Anything. I loved it! Schuldig was excellent as well, but as Farfarello is my major area of obsession, my joy centers around him.

I wish I had time to write more, but I\'ll have to content myself by stating that I\'m equally awed and hooked.
person Sucuri
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Prreeeeetty...very, very pretty. Wish I could write half as well as you. And I\'ll be sad if there is no follow-up, so please?

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