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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, but theres a lot of mistakes that you definitely need to fix.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While all in all its an ok story the problem comes with Akito.. Akito is a female. You can see that in the later chapters of the Manga.. Also Shigure is the one screwing Akito.. (of course there is the thing where i just dont like akito/tohru pairings but i thought id give you my advice)
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it very much. I read ' Light in My life' I was very impressed. You write well.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! finally someone wrote an akiru fic where it doesn\'t involve rape ^_^
i really liked this one!
i really liked this one!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god , I was so excited when you post this fic. I loved light of my life but I must admit it need more details.
Picnic really gave more insight to tohur and akitos relationship.
Picnic really gave more insight to tohur and akitos relationship.