rate_review Reviews

LOVED THE STORY...AND WILL BE WAITING FOR MORE CHAPTERS....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

ROFLMAO! OH THAT WAS SO WRONG! God! oh lord thats good. Keep writing this has just made my crappy day into a good one. I hope you write more soon.

Ah, nothing better than a good Raven/Reese. I\'ve been looking for one of these for awhile, ALL OVER THE NET. Never crossed my mind to check on AFFN. And, really, a lemon to boot? This is great. Maybe slightly too happy for them, but then again, I never saw the entire Zoids: CC series.

--Chibi

Excel. I . I like the way this is turning out.
Being together is one thing but how will they interact with the rest of the world?
Fell free to bring in other cast members from Zoids if you wish to.

hey! i really like the story so far! keep going w/ it ... and i hope things heat up even more between those two, just dont make raven too OOC, u gotta have some of his spicy attitude in there! LOL :)

Yes, this is going very good so far.
Keep Raven the way he is until of course things take a turn for the obvious. Haveing that louse/ahole attitude is what makes Raven Raven, and removeing that too soon would alter the character too much.
Putting in Reese\'s perspective every now and then might be a good idea. Haveing a Zoids fic told from strictly one point of view can get stale really quick, which is a major fanfic killer. I wouldn\'t get the organoids any more involved with the relationship any more than they are right now. Focus on Raven and Reese.

I saw this fic on ff.net!! There\'s a lemon! I\'m gonna go check on fanfiction.net and see it you updated there! I love this story. Raven/Reese are the best! Update!!!