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by Chiruken

person mabel4gs
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In all this mass of underdeveloped childish and just bad writting I run across on the web, I was so amazed to find this wonderful story! This was excellent. The pacing and progression oe ste story was very well done and the characters were deep and thoughtful. The little guessing game at the begining was fun to. Knives or Vash? Ah! I have to back and read it again now that I know! I\'d love to know what happens after the story. Keep up your great work!
Mabel4gs
person Aleya
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@_@ so much hate!!!.. SEri aft after a while things started to blur up *cleans glasses* but i got the point and yep i guess i can say i will read more! bye for now!!

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