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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Hope you finish it soon!! ^^
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fushigi Yuugi was the first anime I watched that made me really *feel* things. Your story is the same way. It\'s confusing sometimes, a little hard to follow, and there are parts missing from chapters three and four I think, but I want to keep reading. I have known far too many people with mental disorders, and so this story means a little extra to me, you know? If you could write more, I would be...grateful. The way you have the dialogue is vague, but interesting. Usually you\'d see it like this, \"...\" instead of this, -... I think that adds to the atmosphere of your fic somehow. I\'ll be looking for an update, and I hope it will be soon.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack! You left off on a cliffhanger! How naughty of you! Anyway, this a very interesting story. I want to know what happens next. ^_^ However, is there a reason you don\'t use quotation marks?
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wooooh...this kicks ass. seriously. although my favorite pairing is chichiri/nuriko [there are NO stories about them..sob...], and i hate mitsukake, this ff rocks. ^_^ write more or ill...ill....um..do something drastic. XD its really good. big lovely words.
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are an awesome writer. OMG! OMG!!!!!
I heart this story!!! This is the first story I read in AFF.net, and it\'s probably one of the best!
Good thing I love fy!
MARRY ME, AMI-SAN AND SU-CHAN!!!*cackles evilly*
I heart this story!!! This is the first story I read in AFF.net, and it\'s probably one of the best!
Good thing I love fy!
MARRY ME, AMI-SAN AND SU-CHAN!!!*cackles evilly*
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
absolutely beautiful. your wording is beyond lovely, very descriptive -- and on top of that, you\'re fully capable of evoking emotion in the reader. and the only complaint I have is the way speech is written, but that could be chalked up to a style thing in the end.
the premise of the fic, too, is one of the more origionesones I\'ve read. love it. keep writing!
the premise of the fic, too, is one of the more origionesones I\'ve read. love it. keep writing!
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this fanfic. It keeps me on edge to find out what happens and how the patients are treated. Mitskake pulls this role off really well and I hope you update soon.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, Shiny! I really enjoyed reading this so far. Though it did take me a while to get used to the way speech is written.
I feel very proud of Mitsukake, he actually managed to land a main role for once.
I feel very proud of Mitsukake, he actually managed to land a main role for once.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yesh! At least one my favorite authors post stories in here. There hasn\'t been lot of readable fics after ff.net took the nc-17 fics away... or then I\'ve just become picky... well anyway... kepp up the great work I wanna know where this is heading...
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really, really good! please continue soon!