schedule
September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story, is has got to be the worst pile of pig shit i have ever seen. My ten year old friend could have done this better. And as for the part of Alucard and Anderson being "Friends" that is the stupidest thing i have ever heard, you made him so out of charater that there is no dignity in his name anymore, take my advice,and stick to reading other people's stuff and forget out trying to write your own because YOU SUCK AT IT!
schedule
August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think she is old enough to have an account here. This can\'t be the work of an adult. Please tell me this isn\'t the work of an adult. Please?
schedule
April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This really did stink. Ya need a grammar checker too. I even saw where ya comined Alexander and Anderson together. -.- Perhaps you try a different approach with this?
schedule
April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um... okay... >> Might a suggest a Beta and a spell check for your grammar and spelling?
schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No.. just no... stop there... so many things wrong with that... grammer is bad. As for plot- ya we wont even go there. Please do 1 of three things, either label your story a Mary-Sue, fix it, or just take it off.
... the bitch has spoken.
... the bitch has spoken.
schedule
January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOUR GRAMMER SUCKS !!!!
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