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for Eternal Devotion

by Brightdreamer

schedule March 12, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Ahhh I loved this! I really enjoyed how even them getting together was a competition and how Kazuma took the lead with his experience but Ryuho was a quick learner and had to show Kazuma his skills, or else he would lose. It just fit them so perfectly! I also how the way you had them talking with each other, it felt like ways they would talk. Thanx so much, bye!!

schedule February 27, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Ahhhh I love this so much! How Ryuho doesn't know exactly why he cares so much that Kazuma lives and why he goes so far to help him. And I really like the ideas of Alters being able to share their power and heal others, especially Sherice's didn't really have anything to do with healing but she was able to. The idea of it being tied to the strength of your feelings and how Ryuho must really care for Kazuma to heal him is something I love.

Also love how Kazuma came back and kinda picked up on Ryuho having saved him and doesn't know how to thank him for it. And how that alone was able to settle Ryuho after he was upset that Kazuma wanted him to leave. This was just so perfect, thanx! 

schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I wish you'd have continued. Anyway, awesomely hot! Thanks for writing that! Yay!
person Cacao
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I truly admired the writing. It was fantastic! I love it. I know it's going to be a story I will not soon forget. I have no idea if you are going to continue and I will not urge but it wouldn't be a waste to continue...
person youko
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY TAHT WAS GREAT!!!I did hope they would have gotten frther hehehe^_^but that okay..so hope you you up-date!!!
person SpBuffy
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I would completely dig it if you continued this story. This was very well written. The characters really consistant with the series. Thanks for your work.
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was really good, soo passionate and erotic...i really REALLY hope there is more to this story. i\'m dying to see what happens next
person reckless mist
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Update soon, kudasai!
person MeLaiya
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man, this was beautifully written. I absolutely loved it. you have got to update with more soon
person fireanice
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMg more plrease how about how kazuma\'z friend react anyway i loved it fangirl squeal

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