rate_review Reviews

Loved the fight and development of the characters! And the spice was just right for to bring the chapter out. Had my attention from start to finish and my stomach in slight flutters. Will be back for more.

Those fight scenes were just hot! And look what they led to. And it's so tasteful! Really like how this is written!

*Squeeeee-loved it!!! This fic was well told...not one boring moment. I cared about what each of them was feeling and the language. Oh, it was just so good!!! The sex scenes were hotness...I'm just loving it. It's one of my favorite fics!!!

That is the best s-CRY-ed fic I've ever read, it's going to take me a while to go back to reading other pairings after this one, can you please write another threesome fic like this one, or you can write a sequel to this one, please?_? I'd greatly appreciate it if you did, and if you don't write it, it's fine by me. ^_^

Wow! I love it! A lot of yaoi I've read just isn't well-written...and if it is, it just isn't very 'sexy'. But, this is both! Never while reading did I have to sit through poor writing or lemon-y scenes that just didn't hold my interest.

The only qualm I have is when earlier, in the gym, when both Tachibana and Ryuhou used their Alters...it didn't really mention anything in the room bursting and altering to form their Alters. Later, you had the empty glass disappear for a single one of Tachibana's spheres, but before that, they just popped out of nowhere. It's not a big deal...it just sort of bothered me.

Anyway, amazing fic! You two have talent!

In all seriousness...

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This is the best damned s-CRY-ed fanfic I have ever read. You hear that? EVER. >< The sex, the relationships, the emotions --- the IMAGRY!

You are the divine ruler of the s-CRY-ed section! Two thumbs up! Ten stars! An A+ grade! Took me three days to read this monster- I pulled late nights and early mornings! Hours at a time I was absorbed in your writing style.

And I must give you bonus points on your excellent portrayal of Tachi. He's a tought guy. So many seem to portray him as weak and overly uke-ish. And Kazuma's emotions and feelings? Yeah. Perfect. I see him as emotional deep down. Give him someone he really cares about and he's practically a giant puppy (Think I can get away with rubbing his tummy? No? I thought so.). And on Ryuhou's characterization I'll have to admit he's a tough target to hit but you did it. You pinned his personality!

So, in conclusion all I really have to say is...


DAMN! You're good!

~ ATG

nooooooooo, u cant end it there, does tachi fix there bodies, wat are the scars...i need to know pls make a sequal or write more pls

wai!!!! this fic was SOOO ROCKIN!!!!! i loved it! specially chapters 11 and 12! ^_^ yosh...that was HAWT!! i must say is one of the BEST (and probably my newest favorite -_^) yaoi lemon scene ive ever read... i also liked how ryuhou and kazuma (slowly) came to realize how much they really cared about each other...and how even then, they still keep their bickering attitudes, which i TOTALLY think they would...ya know, like they didnt get all sappy with each other......damn this is the longest review ive written in awhile, but i just REALLY liked this fic!!! (-_^).v

i loved this, this is the very first scryed with all my fav. characters actually IN character and it was well written. I couldnt ask for anything more...well except maybe another one. Anyhoo, keep up the good work.

That was my first fic of this series and given I don\'t know all that much about it but I really enjoyed your story. Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us here at aff.net.