rate_review Reviews

Wow! Fantastic story. I really liked how you portrayed Tachibana, more experienced than Ryuhou (pardon my spelling) but not as \"wordly\" as Kazuma! There was lots of steamy, sex too. We need to start a S-Cryed fanfic campaign, there just needs to be more fics written for this great anime. And you have contributed nicely to the cause. Hope to read more from you.

your story was absolutely amazing!!!!! you should've gotten SO much more credit for this!!! But i'm glad you wrote this ficc...i've just started watching this series and I've already come to realize that there aren't a lot of decent ficcs out there for it. I'm happy to say that yours is over expectation to me, and just all of it is really really great. And all those lemons scenes **gets all hott** fantastic, i felt like i was right there about to make love with them!! very hott and sexii ~_^ i've come to love all of your work and am now an official fan...plz continue writing, b/c like Kyo had said to Tohru that one time she got sick and stopped smiling, "...or else I won't be happy." ta ta for now hun!!! much love -Abby ~_^

I still think there should have been another scene either at the end of ch. 18 or the beginning of ch. 19! I can\'t help but wonder what was said... or done... between Kazuma and Ryuhou when he went to the bedroom. Ryuhou was waiting up for him... what did he say? Or do? *wants more RyuKazu stuff, can\'t you tell?* ^_^

You left this wide-open for a sequel, too. Any chance of that happening? And might you need another co-author/betareader? ^_^

I’ve read a lot of yaoi fan fiction but this is by far the best one I’ve ever read. I like the way that you give the story a point and purpose. It’s not just a PWP there’ substance to ‘Altered Threesome’ that you cant find in most yaoi fan fics. I love that through out the whole story you are able to keep each character in character. Though they have all evolved to fit this new situation, you can see that they are still the same people. Like no matter how comfortable Ryuho and Kazuma my get around one another they still seem to hate each other due to their pride. The chemistry between the three of them is wonderful and you just can’t stop reading once you’ve started.

I can’t wait to read more and I think I definitely should have reviewed you story earlier. I registered at AFF just to write you a response because I though this story was so phenomenal!

Keep Up the Creativity,
Nova Elizabeth Beam

You know a fic is good when you can\'t pick between the pairings in it even though your favorite pairing from the universe is already set... -_-;; I don\'t know whether I like Ryuhou (cute, awkward, uncertain) with Tachibana or Kazuma (straightforward, have-a-good-time, don\'t-hold-back goodness). Haha well, I guess, based on the title, that I won\'t have to pick between them in the long run, but right now I\'m in a tizzy! update soon! ^_^

Just a quick note: you seemed to leave the \"//\'s\" out of the thoughts in chapter 7. It made it a little hard to distinguish them.

Otherwise, still enjoying re-reading this!

Man, what a heartbreaker of a chapter! But still, very true to Ryuhou\'s character... I can\'t wait to see more of this! ^_^

Every chapter is better then the last.. and that\'s no small accomplishment! The characters are potrayed so well so far.. just love it.

Thought I\'d just drop a quick line, since a few have been asking about this.

There will be a threesome, I promise! It\'ll just take a while. This part of the story is before Kazuma becomes known to HOLY. In a few more chapters, the story will skip ahead to post-series, and then the big red will show up. Thanks for commenting and being patient!

>^.^<
--Shuukitty--

Where\'s the Threesome!!! Not that I\'m complaining about what you have so far ^_^ Just wanna see some Kazuya action. Antway, awaiting update.