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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez, that was great! I really, really really really really reallllllllllly want an update!!! You don\'t see a lot of good Scryed fics out there, and this one is absolutely delicious in a way that\'s true to the characters. Keep it up please!
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so much already! It\'s really well written and absolutely addicting. I hope that you continue with it!
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! You posted the next chapter! I\'m gonna have fun re-reading this.
To the bedroom we go, woo! XD
And a little comment, if you feel like revising this later: you might want to cut down on the elipses a bit. I know people do think and talk with pauses, but sometimes it\'s a little too much to be used in all dialogue and thoughts, y\'know? It\'s a problem I have myself, in my own fics, and my betareader commented on it. So now I notice it with everyone else\'s fics too! XD
To the bedroom we go, woo! XD
And a little comment, if you feel like revising this later: you might want to cut down on the elipses a bit. I know people do think and talk with pauses, but sometimes it\'s a little too much to be used in all dialogue and thoughts, y\'know? It\'s a problem I have myself, in my own fics, and my betareader commented on it. So now I notice it with everyone else\'s fics too! XD
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Glad you got the first chapter up. I\'ll enjoy re-reading this! ^__^ Still one of my favorite s-CRY-ed fics ever.