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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whaaaaaaa you can't just stop in the middel like that!!!T________T*sniff whats wrong with you sniff*But yeah that was GREAT!!!!!!!UP DATE SOON^_^
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IS THAT THE WAY YOU,ER ENDING IT!THATS NOT GOOD;I WANT TO SEE THE END!WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.(SORRY IT WAS CHUT REALLY GOOD ^-^) SO ......WREIT ONE SOON PLEAES.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...where\'s the REST? duude...no warning of an ending or anything just like BOOM it\'s over...
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O u....u stopped it in the middle of them making love!!!! T__________T TEASE!!!!!!!!!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaawwww what a cute story! I liked it very much! I cant wait till you write more! Keep it up! ^__^
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea-uh! I wholly enjoyed tstorstory! It had everything... a mission, description, foreplay, a spicy hot lemon and a convo after the good stuff! Yes! Perfect! This was just what I was looking for. Lucky me! Actually...lucky Aya and Omi!
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea-uh! I wholly enjoyed this story! It had everything... a mission, description, foreplay, a spicy hot lemon and a convo after the good stuff! Yes! Perfect! This was just what I was looking for. Lucky me! Actually...lucky Aya and Omi!
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this; you write AyaxOmi very well! Looking forward to more AO fics from you!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I wonder... is there going to be a sequal? Keep up the good work, and I would absolutly keep on reveiwing.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ms. mamoru says:
*between crazed giggles and heavy breathing* THIS...FIC.....IS....GOD.....!!!!! i LOVE omi/aya pairings!!! @_@ ^_^ i like the part where omi is saying all this stuff really incoherently, and aya is like \"yup, okay, i get you.\" ^_^ good stuff. good stuff.
wataru-chan says:
::has another intense major spaz:: WHEEEEEE!!!! Awesome job! ::applauds majorly:: Really well-written, good plot! -^__^- Good plot, yes indeedy... Omi/Aya always works, that it does. ^__^ Ah yes, Omi\'s incoherent sentences..those were great. Good show, good show, mate!! ::spaz::
*between crazed giggles and heavy breathing* THIS...FIC.....IS....GOD.....!!!!! i LOVE omi/aya pairings!!! @_@ ^_^ i like the part where omi is saying all this stuff really incoherently, and aya is like \"yup, okay, i get you.\" ^_^ good stuff. good stuff.
wataru-chan says:
::has another intense major spaz:: WHEEEEEE!!!! Awesome job! ::applauds majorly:: Really well-written, good plot! -^__^- Good plot, yes indeedy... Omi/Aya always works, that it does. ^__^ Ah yes, Omi\'s incoherent sentences..those were great. Good show, good show, mate!! ::spaz::