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for Smiling Monster

by Reika

person Kayla
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Just utterly Amazing. *beyond envious* I wish I could write that well.
person Ryu-chan
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reika!!! So glad to see you back in the land of the living... are you all better now??
Like before, you\'ve done a great job writing...

... looking forward to reading the next few chapters of TFC and more of your work.

good luck with everything
person Jade
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, excellent, excellent.

Captivating sense of detail and a very effective use of the second-person POV.. I think I\'m in love!
person Pink Haired Baka
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was written so well. I really liked how you protrayed the characters. All the emmense details and ranging emotions were heart felt. This fiction was fucking fantastic and I loved how you were sarcastic and dissing Tohma. Personally, I don\'t like that kid at all. Anyway, it was rather depressing and I\'m suddenly not so happy anymore. But that just proves as a writer, you succeeded with getting your message across. Keep up the great work. You\'re awesome.

-Shu.
person Keishi
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, dark, introspective fic. Loved it, even the writing style.
person madness
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you weren\'t kiddiboutbout the depressing...
good fic anyway!
person Terry
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic! Please write a sequel. maybe Yuki pov in it? Keep it going!
person deathswings
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the perspective in this story-- very good use of second person. I usually don\'t like stories with angsty sorts of endings, but I really enjoyed this one. You have a real talent for knowing what to describe in detail and what not to-- like Shindou\'s knees being bruised. Very good story all around!
person Caska Almasy
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, simply amazing. This is such a good story and I feel really sad for Hiro. Make a se! I ! I demand that you make a sequel! :P

love
Caska
person Anya
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I loved this new stile of writing!!!!! That was really good & please, write a sequel to it!!!! It was really really beautiful sad story. Again, please continue.
Best Wishes!!!! XD

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