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for Pieces of Glass.

by modernmouse

person Yma
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I\'m on a roll now! Seriously, though, this was pretty good. Very Or bor both caracters (especially Vash) but you seem to be awear of it and so that\'s alr. Wo. Would I like to read more? Sure, you\'re a skilled enough writer to pull this off just fine. In many other, lesser writers it would seem trite and stupid, but here you get a real feeling of angst, loss, and a dreadful apathy. I\'d like to see what exactly it was that finally \'broke\' Vash (as this is about as Broken as I\'ve ever seen or read him.) So yeah, I\'d like to read more of this kind of stuff, if you do it. Anyway, I\'ll let you get back to more important things. Thanks for the cool story!
person Rali
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, ow? Don\'t think I\'m processing rightly, but the wriggly feeling in my stomach says otherwise. That was beautiful, agashi. Haven\'t had such a brain crunch in days. And you know, this is exactly the kind of relationship I see those two in sometimes, when they\'re having one of their serious, guns-to-each-other\'s-heads moments. Wolfwood IS a bastard priest with alligator blood in his veins and Vash IS a tired, depressed alien being who\'s cared for so long tha all all just kind of bled out of him. I\'ve been longing for a fic that explored this side of Vash the Stampede, and this just swept me off my feet, you know you are a god?
Wow. You rock my socks, lady.

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