rate_review Reviews

That was well written and i loved the mythological references. Even though the sex scene was a bit spontaneous, but still, pretty awesome. You're a great writer.

This is above average. It actually had me very engaged at times. Your characterizations were strong, the dialogue was very poignant and beautifully sadistic, the actions and motions accompanying the dialogue complemented it very nicely, as would happen in a real Akito scene. There are times when cliche language and phrases trip you up, and the dialogue would have been even better if it were more subtle (but equally powerful). I can\'t say I liked the sex scene at all; having Hatori be the seme was an unusual plot twist, but I think it would have worked much better if he were the uke.
I like your developing style, let me know if you write anything else, especially with our sexy doctor friend.

Wow, that was really good! Very original -- I like the twist that you added to the character's personalities.....it made them seem really deep. Very artfully written -- Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!

BEAUTIFUL... Simply beautiful. Makes me love Akito more and more x3. You potray him so well *snuggles Akito* muwahhaha >3

I challange you to write a Akito/Yuki lemon!

Whoa, my brains fucked up just from reading this and I mean that in the best possible way! Kickass pairing. I don\'t usually read Male/Male fanfics, but there\'s just something about crazy ass Akito and stoic Hatori that gets to me. Great fic.

That was verrrrryyyyyyyyy interesting. Akito\'s creepy and evil, but I did enjoy the story. Maybe Hatori is just what the twisted man need.

Whoa, this was wild and addicting. And you definitely have Akito pegged right, personalitse. se. After reading this Ill look forward to your next story. =D

*sweatdrop* I\'m at a loss for words... need to read again~!