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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
...THAT WAS SEXY AS HELL!!!!!!!! *blush* would u mabey do one kinda like that with shuichi and ryuichi im kinda craving that pairing right now ^.^
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was really good! I love how you captured Yuki\'s anger, but still allowed him to be tender. AND...I absolutely loved that Shuichi liked it rough...too hot.
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this fanfics so much. I so into it. As though I was actully their. As Yaoi fan girl Princess I congralate on wirting such a great yaoi . And THANKYOU FOR MAKING IT SO DETAILED.
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like to congrulate on such a great fan fics. It has been a while since come across upon such a great pice that makes feel life in the beatiful action. I am prod to say this fics will be on my Princess top tenmust read yaoi fanfiction list. I sure my Yaoi fan friends will be delighed.And last but not least THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS SO DETAILED.
Love your new fan,
Yaoi Princess
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Love your new fan,
Yaoi Princess
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...I loved your work for \'Phone Call\'...But I\'m not so much as a fan of this particluar fic.
1) There\'s too many excalmn pon points, you *never* use those in a sex sence, never. Ikes kes it sound corny and made up, y\'know?
2) It wasn\'t very descriptive, you need to have a story behind everything so the readers cadersderstand the story better, like with the fight, you should have written down the fight. It would have been good.
Well I though I would give you some helpful critizisum, I like the idea, you just need to work on it a bit.
I still love \'Phone Call\' nonetheless ^^
1) There\'s too many excalmn pon points, you *never* use those in a sex sence, never. Ikes kes it sound corny and made up, y\'know?
2) It wasn\'t very descriptive, you need to have a story behind everything so the readers cadersderstand the story better, like with the fight, you should have written down the fight. It would have been good.
Well I though I would give you some helpful critizisum, I like the idea, you just need to work on it a bit.
I still love \'Phone Call\' nonetheless ^^
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm, all I can say is...Wow..Oo; Just..wow..
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your a GREAT writter!! I\'ve been writting fanfics about Gravitation and their not as good as YOURS!!! WOW~ That was the best sex sense never~~~ I hope that you cont. walking fanfics because your a great writter. I hope I can\'t write as great as you some day. Keep up the good work and I\'ll be looking for more of your fanfics. Think you can write one about K and Shuichi
Thanks ~
Thanks ~
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ow man!!!!!O_O!!! That was SSOOOOO hot!!!
Want more!!! =) Keep up with the good work!!!
Want more!!! =) Keep up with the good work!!!
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good but I feel sorry for those poor exclamaion points ;(
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yes! That was definitely HOT!
OMFG! SOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMFG! SOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!