rate_review Reviews

I don\'t know why I didn\'t discover this before... it\'s phenomenal. I love so many things about it... the fact that they were both virgins, the tension, the love. Except for a few minor spelling mistakes (and I get those too) I have no complaints... and I loved the setup, you didn\'t need to insult it LOL You describe intimacy so well. You obviously took a lot of time and care with this peice and I appreciate that... I hope you write more.

Vash and Meryl smut. God bless you, you wonderful, wonderful woman.

sweet! i d itd it!

I love this story. I loved it the first, second, third...well, you get the idea...times I read it. I was too lazy to leave a review, partly \'cause I couldn\'t think of anything to properly express how I felt about the story and how superb I thought it was. I still don\'t, but I feel compelled to at least try.

I love the way you\'ve characterized the familiar pair. I really enjoyed how you painted the picture of utter despair so descriptively after Meryl said those awful things to Vash and his ultimate reaction. I had to reread that passage about 10 times because the impact was so wonderful. I could almost feel his pain.

All in all...I ry, ry, really enjoyed this story of yours and can\'t wai see see the second chapter come up. (I\'ve already read it...can\'t remember where, was it FFn? MediaMiner? I just don\'t remember...and I liked it a lot and thought that it was a fitting end to such a great story.)

Of course, just \'cause I read it already doesn\'t mean that I won\'t read it again!

^_^x

Chiruken

PS Keep writing! I love what you do!