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Okaaaay. This review might be kind of late, but I JUST HAD to 'speak' my thoughts.
This. . . was just so. . . incredible. I don't even think that begins to describe it. Your writing is so fluid and beautiful. Pretty cliche, but words just can't explain it. Seriously, I'm at a loss of what to say right now. Many times while I was reading this, I had to resist the strong urge to cry. The pain that Goku went through, what Konzen/Sanzo/Huyen experienced. What got to me the most was Goku though. Watching your loved ones die, having no choice but to keep living in solitude, waiting for them. Hvaing to deal with going countless years without even a word from them. And now I'm just blabbing. I do wish though, to hear from you soon with a sequel to this. Trying not to get my hopes up though. I'm kind of disappointed though, at the lack of reviews you have recieved. This piece of work deserves far more than it has. Pity people don't really bother to review much over on Aff.net. Maybe you could try posting it on Fanfiction.net, if you haven't already. Just a thought though. And I'm still blabbing! Haha, once again, I hope to hear from you soon, even though we haven't seen much of you lately. Keep writing!! =]]

There are no words to express how wonderful this fic, except that I love it. The Emotion and characters behavior shows how much hard work you put into it. I hope you continue to write. ^_^ I only wish Tenpou and Kenren was with them at the end. Oh well. Can't have everything, right? Anyway, just wanted to drop you a line, thanking you for writing an awesome fic. I hope you write more fics like it.
Lots of Love!!!
Suiri

This is a great story. Thank you for sharing it.

Excellent ficcie, outstanding concept. Love the characterizations and way you adapted them to suit the plot while keeping them delightfully IC. Especially loved the direction you took with Goku; keeping his personality in-tact while expanding on it to offer some unique insight that I haven\'t read in another fic. Lovely, lovely job. Look forward to more from you, as always.

It's a beautiful night!!! It's a joy to visit this site and read such fabulous stories such as this! I hope you continue writing! YOu're a great asset to any mythos! n______________________n you made me smile like this!

i thought that this story was abosulutly amazing, the fact that Goku was angsting was really heart breaking. keep up the good work!

This is a great piece of writing but..

The last chapter isn\'t showing or mor me here on AFF.net.. and I wanna know how it ends...T_T

Otherwise, great job! Please more?

Thought you\'d like to know that several chapters seem to be missing.

I love your fanfiction, but I\'m having a hard time reading it. Many of the chapters don\'t show up. I can get into the chapter, but nothing is there except a short note. The fanfiction seems to be missing. Then the next chapter doesn\'t make sense because I couldn\'t read what came before. Is it supposed to be like that or is some of the fiction missing? I really can\'t tell. But I love what I\'ve been able to read so far.

This story was simply incredible! On the one hand, I can\'t believe I waited so long to read it... But on the other hand, I think I would have gone crazy if I\'d been left in the middle, waiting for an update. Only one other fanfiction I\'ve read has kept me so glued to the screen as I was for this one -- from chapter 8 all the way to the end. (It was pointless to try doing anything else when I couldn\'t NOT ponder what might be coming next... *laugh*) Technically speaking, I loved the multiple prespectives used, how I could \"see\" into each character\'s thoughts, and I also loved how that perspective changed with each paragraph. It gave an almost energetic feel to the writing style. And, though some liberties inevitably need to be taken to allow lemons on the scene (*grin*), you kept the characters amazingly true to themselves... Even Bosatsu, whom (I often feel) even the better writers write poorly. Bravo on all levels! Please don\'t lightly promise a sequel without intending to write more, because I would so dearly love to read one. ^_^ Especially now as, with two of them in each world, I\'m already fretting the four will never get to all come together again... Can\'t let THAT happen! ^_^;;