rate_review Reviews

I finally finished it and I have to admit I want even more. I was hesitant to start this because AU isn’t really my thing, but the concept intrigued me.
You did an excellent job with this. Sure, there were a few technical errors, we all have those. You can get 15 beta-readers and you’ll still have a few technical errors. I feel your characterizations are on point. I think you took us through the group dynamic very well and your portrayal of the inner angst was superb. I like that you brought Gojyo back into it, something just seemed to be missing with him not there. Don’t worry about *how* it happened or *why* he’s back from the dead. We all have heard our favorite Goddess and her cocky attitude “Nothing’s impossible for me” and I am not going to try to pick a fight with her if she decides to “take back a move”.
I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the great job!

Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*

Thanks for the great story!!!!! I loved it really much!!! Kinda pity you didn’t put off Goku’s power limiter during his and Konzen’s love session, though I can live without that. I just mean Goku is soooo cute when hishouthout that thing…..
Hope to read more of your stories soon.
Best Wishes, XD

Ah...! Cliff hanger angst! xD This was a really great chapter. It\'s really interesting (and kind of sad) how Huyen keeps wondering if he\'ll still be himself. I hope he will. ;) I really like him! I love the liberties taken, too. xD It\'s not like Minekura-sensei doesn\'t. ;) But I was hoping Huyen might see Seiten Taisei. Oh well. LoL Here\'s to another great chapter!

I\'m sooooo happy you updated so soon!!! I just love your story & I\'m never getting tired of reading it. Really good stuff.
Still hope to read more soon & I\'m just dieing to find out who the bastard demon is.
Best Wishes, XD

For a very good reason I love it when you update!!!! First – your chapters are not just big but they I really interesting. Second – it leaves me anxious to read more. By the way I thought Jin was dead – it was kinda weird to see him well & very alive – but still I’m glad he’s ok….But why did he leave Huyen??? Still would you ever take Goku’s band from his head – just curious. ^.^ I love all the mass he manages himself to get into.
Hope to read cha chapies soon.
Best Wishes, XD

*is kicking herself* I\'m so sorry guys! Somehow, there\'s a chapter missing in there. I don\'t know how it happened, but I\'ll get it fixed asap. I was wondering why everyone was puzzled about Jin....

Sorry again! Please check back to get the missing chapter. Thanks for all the great reviews--we really appreciate it!
--Shuukitty--

This story is perhaps the best 39 story I\'ve read yet...... I really love Huyen!!!!!! The last chapter was a little confusing, b/c I didn\'t really get why/how Jin was back, but other than that, it\'s a wonderful story!! The sexual bits are really great, too... Well worded and engrossing! I love the Huyen angst the most, though. ^_~;;;;; This is a really beautiful story. Please keep it up!!!

^.^ lol Okay, best yaoi fanfic ever. The hentai goes write into the story, passionate and following and all mixing to this awesome storyline I must know the end to.

^.^() Wanted to make sure you guys knew you uploaded ch. 13 for ch. 14 too. I tried to find an e-mail addy instead of reviewing but...anywho, thought you should know (and I wanna see Jin XD)

Still very good & interesting.
Update soon.
Best Wishes, XD