rate_review Reviews

Thank you for a wonderful story please keep writing it helps those of us that are still trying to find our own voice to hear the voices of others

Just wandered across this...Wanted to leave a review saying it\'s beautiful. 99% of fics that attempt this sort of thing succeed only in annoying me endlessly, but this actually almost had me in tears. I like the fact that the lemon-y-ness was left as an understatement, and used only to illustrate the emotion inside Wolfwood\'s head. One teeny grammatical thing, though...you use \"had had\", which isn\'t necessarily bad english, but interrupts the flow of the prose. Other than that, this story is WONDERFULLY written. Thanks : )

Ohhhh...

*cries all over self*

I love how Wolfwood loves Vash. I wan to tell you what my fave lines were, but there are far too many. *pets her pretty preacher* Oh Wolfwood, I love you so.

I really like this story, no matter if it\'s older. The beginning\'s a bit rocky but that\'s all right. Beginnings ARE often rocky. It\'s still very well done (and the angs*mor*more sobbing*).

Oh...man...you made me cry...

It was just so sad...so many things left unsaid. So lovely...and just...Oh...I cry...*sniffles*

hi! i liked your story. it was strange but good. i didn\'t notice any glaring mistakes. and the \"in-wolfwood\'s-head\" approach was well executed. ^_^ k, bye now.

*sniffles* Erg. THAT WAS SOOOOOOO WELL WRITTEN. But so sad. *sighs and stares forlornly at her monitor* That was just the most beautiful piece of writing, you know. Just.... ACKH! *wibbles* I\'m sorry, I\'ve only just like gotten over Wolfwood dying and all that, and this is just- just such a wonderful piece of writing, except it\'s made me go all sad and swishy. hm. :-. Oh well, I\'ll go and find some happy slashy pics :D Keep up the fantastical work, k? Or Shardd\'ll hafta hunt you down with a salmon sandwich! :) CIAO!

Yours strangely,


Shardd the Spider

Wow O_O

I love the point of view for this story - it worked exactly as you said you wanted it to. Made the experiance a little more personal. ^^

Great job :D Please continue writing.

You write beautifully. Your version of Wolfwood\'s thoughts is dead on, no pun intended. It\'s *squee* worthy and sad all at the same time. I can\'t decide if you should try to flesh it out a little, give it a \'prequel\' if you will, or leave it as is. (I think deep down in my heart I\'m hoping you write more about it.) Well done. ^.^

::sniffles:: sad but beautiful. I definately think you got the \'in wolfwood\'s head\' feeling across. I loved it, though I am all sad now. ;)

AH at last! Iv\'e finally found out how to review on this bloody sitenywanyway, back to the serious part. Yeah, this fic was good. Very, very good. I\'m not much of a huge slash fan, but the writing was touching and I liked how you took it all the way to Woolfwoods death. That last scene in particular was very touching. I found the first part a little confusing, the mathamatics bit espeically seemed something to come more out of Vash\'s head that Wolfwoods, but maybe that\'s just me. All in all this was pretty good. Well done!