rate_review Reviews

Wow. That was just beautiful. For once someone depicted a doomed love without all the silly dramiticicm. You did a wonderful job with the portrayal of Gren and Faye, and I think it could have very well fit into the series smoothly. I think I gotta agree with you, there is a strong chance that Gren wouldnt have been capable of much more than oral, and that added to the realism of the peice, and it certainly explained a lot about Fayes mood after Jet found her. My congratulations to you. You didondeonderful job.
Much luv and cookies!
Natakamani

I enjoyed that... I love Gren and Faye stories and this had the same sad tone as the episodes. This is the first Gren and Faye fic I ever read where the author had the guts to remember that Gren has breasts and have Faye enjoy them. Good for you!

I am so happy someone finally wrote a Gren and Faye fic. The pairing had always intrigued me so much. And you are a very decent writer, so that made it all the better. But that made me so sad, Gren wanted to be inside of Faye, why didn\'t you write a full sex scene? I mean I know the drugs he took left him unable to climax, but still, it made me sad :/

Oh well, nice job!

Thanks. Actually, I felt that Gren wouldn\'t be realistically capable of much more than oral sex due to his hormonal condition. Who knows tho? He\'s a great character.

Great fic!! There really aren\'t enougth Gren fics out there~~ I would have loved to see Gren and Faye do more than oral, but still, this is a great fic!! :-D