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July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story was really sad and I cried a lot and that's saying something considering I cant really control my facial expressions. TT^TT. Please make more because you are a talented writer and I just love this pairing so keep up the good work. ,^-^,
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was...that was...one of the best fanfictions
I\'ve ever read.It made me want to cry but seeing as I
have excellent willpower,I didn\'t.Wow.I mean
like WOW.Yay for mpregs!My favorite kind of
fanfiction is an mpreg.I now want to go check out your
other fanfictions now.Am going to do that.
I\'ve ever read.It made me want to cry but seeing as I
have excellent willpower,I didn\'t.Wow.I mean
like WOW.Yay for mpregs!My favorite kind of
fanfiction is an mpreg.I now want to go check out your
other fanfictions now.Am going to do that.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD. THat\'s about all i can say, my tears are too much
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i do not belive i have read a better fic
ill read the secqel now and see if its as good
ill read the secqel now and see if its as good
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yoh is in love with Anna, not Manta. Rewrite, please.
That, and the angst in your story is terrible.
That, and the angst in your story is terrible.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEllO falcon-chan!
NAISU!
T__T but you made ren the bad guy! and you made hao the bad guy? WHY T__T
But still nice!
-keiko
NAISU!
T__T but you made ren the bad guy! and you made hao the bad guy? WHY T__T
But still nice!
-keiko
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, after reading the chapter with anna\'s threat, i couldn\'t read on anymore. T_____________T anna is my favorite character, please understand. XP So i skipped to the last chapter...so..did manta. just GIVE BIRTH? I don\'t know.because...well i wasn\'t really reading carefully..and yah..GOMEN.
But i still thought you fic was gorgeous, the plot, the style, just not the characters so much..^^;;...
-keiko
But i still thought you fic was gorgeous, the plot, the style, just not the characters so much..^^;;...
-keiko
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, you have NO idea how good of a writer you are. Not only do you write stories that effect me (and Little Boy did i swear i was crying by the middle and i applaud and author that can make me do that) but you write of my favorite pairing for shaman king: Manta and Yoh!! i always read any new stories you have and both the sequel and Another World seems very promising! i can\'t wait for more of your spectactular writing!!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PHWEE! This was awesome! And to answer the question at the bottom of the last page, SEQUEL!!!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^___________________________^ That was a wonderful wonderful ending!!! So sweet and warm!! That fic was excellent..thankies for putting my name in this that was sweet *GLOMP* ooo I hope for a sequal!! YohMan is just soo perfect