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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KL writing erotica? Que Cosa! The scary thing about this is that it was extremely well done. I have read erotica before and the description was unlike any I have read before. Nice job.
As far as the plot goes, I wonder how many people go through the torturous tumult of what Miaka and Tasuki are going through. There is a very important amoral-socio message here and it was well-received by Big Scary. Miaka must be going nuts! (no pun intended of course)
I love, KL, how you bring your characters to life-I delved right in!
There were \"technical\" questions I had...so if you want to ask me...I think (and hope) you know who I am.
As always a superior writing performance. Be proud!
AA :)
As far as the plot goes, I wonder how many people go through the torturous tumult of what Miaka and Tasuki are going through. There is a very important amoral-socio message here and it was well-received by Big Scary. Miaka must be going nuts! (no pun intended of course)
I love, KL, how you bring your characters to life-I delved right in!
There were \"technical\" questions I had...so if you want to ask me...I think (and hope) you know who I am.
As always a superior writing performance. Be proud!
AA :)
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well KittyMeBabe, all I can add to what I\'ve already told ya is that you really know how to set a mood! >;-)
The thing that I like about your love scenes is that they\'re based on deep love. You did a great job in establishing those feelings between Fang Boy and Miaka in a very short time.
I can\'t help feeling sorry for the monk tho, Heh heh.
Keep up the great work.
Love ya,
The Bandit
The thing that I like about your love scenes is that they\'re based on deep love. You did a great job in establishing those feelings between Fang Boy and Miaka in a very short time.
I can\'t help feeling sorry for the monk tho, Heh heh.
Keep up the great work.
Love ya,
The Bandit
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH that was great i am so looking forward to reading more of this story please continue when u have a spare moment!!!!!!
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! nice story, no da! XD keep up the good work!, hope you have next chapter soon
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I likes it ^_^ Keep up the good work. AKA MORE WANT MORE!!!
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KL-no-hentai!
I can\'t believe it! You actually did it!....*looks at a broken thermometer* You broke my sizzle meter! If I thought the teaser was hot...boy was I wrong this even though an opening chapter was way much more. I\'m actually kinda scared to see the rest....but you sure better write more!!!! If not I\'ll be forced to use drastic measures...*prepares her arsenal of crossdressers to raid should KL not finish this fic*
~SM~
I can\'t believe it! You actually did it!....*looks at a broken thermometer* You broke my sizzle meter! If I thought the teaser was hot...boy was I wrong this even though an opening chapter was way much more. I\'m actually kinda scared to see the rest....but you sure better write more!!!! If not I\'ll be forced to use drastic measures...*prepares her arsenal of crossdressers to raid should KL not finish this fic*
~SM~
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best Tasuki/Miaka parings I\'ve ever read, mainly because they are really staying in character. Keep it up and keep it going!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is very well done for the first chapter. ((_^= Please keep writing
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
Wow, great opening chapter. While I would have been jumping for joy if Tasuki and Miaka had let nature run its course, I like it better that you held them off. Gives them time to sort themselves out ^.^ and not rush into things, especiallen ten they\'re a bit drunk!
I\'m curious to where Little Ghost ended up. Maybe he is in Miaka\'s world but just in another country... Or maybe he never went there but ended up in another world... Hmm. Hope you update soon so that I can find out ^.~ And of course, more Miaka/Tasuki citrusy goodness as well. Sounds good to mehankhank you for your review and never-ending song on ff.net, I have a reputation among my friends for getting amusing emails and reviews! It did cheer me up though, thank you. ::sends a hug back across Atlantic::
Hope you are all okay and can\'t wait for the next chapter (another fic to add to my bookmark collect^.^)^.^)
Take care,
Milkshake
Wow, great opening chapter. While I would have been jumping for joy if Tasuki and Miaka had let nature run its course, I like it better that you held them off. Gives them time to sort themselves out ^.^ and not rush into things, especiallen ten they\'re a bit drunk!
I\'m curious to where Little Ghost ended up. Maybe he is in Miaka\'s world but just in another country... Or maybe he never went there but ended up in another world... Hmm. Hope you update soon so that I can find out ^.~ And of course, more Miaka/Tasuki citrusy goodness as well. Sounds good to mehankhank you for your review and never-ending song on ff.net, I have a reputation among my friends for getting amusing emails and reviews! It did cheer me up though, thank you. ::sends a hug back across Atlantic::
Hope you are all okay and can\'t wait for the next chapter (another fic to add to my bookmark collect^.^)^.^)
Take care,
Milkshake
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so far a very good fan fiction. Your writing draws the reader in, please continue you are a great author. Well keep up the great work.
Kalika
Kalika