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by KittyLynne

person Spak-chan
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squees all over KL* Wonderful! Magnificiento! (not sure exactly what language that is...)

But then you already know what I think. ^.~ Great job, KL! You can reduce a fangirl to a puddle without even having a kiss in the chapter! Gah!

person The Bandit
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kittymebabe,

Great job with the tension-you\'ve gotten your poor hubby all hot and bothered now. Grrrrrowl!
I think this is some of your best writing yet, to be honest.
Glad you got over that spell of writers block in such a fine and sexual fashion. Don\'t stop now! Please - don\'t - stop!
>evil grin<

Love,
The Bandit
person Tenshi Kitsune
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay first and foremost: MORE! please? need to read more of this beautiful ficcy! tis amazing i tell ya! i wanted tasuki and miaka to kiss so badly that i actually cursed my magician for walking in on them! i never curse Chiri no matter what, but in this case i had to make an exception. the descriptions of tasuki and miaka together were so real and intense, but yet soft and shy too...i hit my head on the monitor i was so into the chappy! x:) as usual you have this amazing ability to make a story seem real and the peole in it even more real. i also really liked how you made chichiri so understanding about tasuki and mia\'s feelings towards each other and how because of that, he didn\'t want to ruin miaka\'s happiness by telling her about tamahome. good characterization, fitting and yet different from other writers somehow. at any rate, you made my dday with this, but english calls (see? i even stopped my homework to reads cas cause i knew it was going to be amgly gly beautiful and full of fire).
later days, (hopefully not too much later, but if it ends up way way no problems)
~Tenshi Kitsune~
person amyfushigiyugi
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it so far tasuki sounds compleatly yummmmmmy and chichiri sounds very understanding of it all as he sound he always did know more then others hope its not to long for the update because it looks to be a awsome story

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