rate_review Reviews

I think this is my...oh...say...4th time reading this? Haha. It's so hard to find good Tasuki/Miaka stories both on this site AND FF.net, and I think yours pretty much tops 'em all. :)

I was hoping you'd continue this! I'm not an author on here or anything so I have no way of keeping track of this story, but every now and again I'll come back and check for that next chapter.

Sorry I haven't reviewed. I thought you'd given up on it, so I didn't feel the need to.

Well, I hope that this new year of 2006 (even if it's not so new now) goes much better than 2005 did. I think EVERYONE had a bad year in '05.

Good luck and have fun!

awesome story Im not a big tamahome fan so Im happy to see tasuki and miaka together ^^ lol do you ride horses? it seems like you do which mades this more interesting for me cause I own horses

I love this pairing. You are doing a great job with this story, don't worry about the time it takes to finish. This is a great read no matter what and your writting and plot development is wonderful.

This story is amazingly written. The attention to sensory detail, the insights into the characters and their relationships, and your passionate way of describing their emotions has me captivated. You have a talent for making me feel the things the characters do. Tasuki, Miaka and Chichiri's inner thoughts and their speaking parts sound exactly like they would sound in canon. Specifically I really enjoyed how Tasuki and Miaka's conversations heighten the anticipation and sexiness of the mood. Though the erotic elements are lovely, I confess that I like that there is much more to your love scenes than the usual descriptions about what's going on 'down there'. Along with the action, you invoke all of the senses in describing Tasuki and Miaka's actions, emotions and reactions to each other. Unlike a lot of authors, your sex has underlying meaning. Every time Tasuki and Miaka touch each other, they learn more about each other and their relationship. The more they get to know about each other, the more pleasure they give to each other (and to the reader.) With a subtle and deft hand, you have illustrated the point that there is no better aphrodisiac than love.

To conclude, I would be remiss if I didn't mention my enjoyment of your wonderful snippets of humor and a provocative plot which (along with the excellent story title) has me wondering if this story will have a 'happily ever after' for Miaka and Tasuki. I will be eagerly awaiting the answer to that questions in future chapters.

Thank you.

Sincerely,
Anna

P.S. I was very sorry to read of your loss and I hope that you are in the process of healing. Take your time and do not worry. A writer of your high caliber and talent will not be forgotten by those of us who have been lucky enough to discover you.

Oh, I love this story so much! ^_^ I think the way that you make the characters talk and act are great, and it was really funny when you just made her fall into his lap like that. Poor guy though... X.x Its gunna fall off if they dont do something soon, but its sweet how you wrote him to care about her needs more then his. You're a great writer, and I hope that you do afterall make future chapters. Its very stressful to devote all that time to reading what it took so long for the writers to create, to have them just give up on the story just like that. And with that said, I wish you the best of writeing and I hope you contact me by email to tell me when the next chapter is finished, thanks! *Smiles politely and gives a quick bow.*

This is a beautiful story and a lot more real and romantic than most fanfic lemons I've read. You are obviously of age and know of what you write. ;)
I hope you will be able to continue it soon; there aren't many erotic stories out there that are of this high quality (not to mention actually having a plot.)

I think that this story is so erotic. i myself am a FY fan and i love Tasuki hes the coolest character on FY KEEP IT UP!!

NOOOOO how could you tease me, you insane woman? :P I thought there was a chapter four the second I saw it was back at the top of the list! (falls into a melty puddle of Miaka adn Tasuki goodness) Oh well I'll hear back from you! :P

bUrn me baby one more time....hi miss lynne! emails not working so I thought I\'d give a shout out through my review. Buuuuurn baby, burn... Tasuki and Miaka, yeah baby! I\'m in quite the mood, I\'ll tell you about it later

OMFG! I LOVE THIS STORY! I WANT TO KNOW YOU, that way, I can worship you five times daily. You rock my socks. And you know what saddens me? You have had this story up for a year and ten months, and you have THREE CHAPTERS! I realize that not everyone doesn\'t have a life like me, and some are super busy, but could you please not give up on this story? And PLEASE update soon? It would mean the world to me! I\'ll pay you. I\'ll give you gifts. I\'ll... buy you a small island or a star or an exotic animal or something just as random! PLEASE! This story is amazing; they should make it into a show, like they did with that crappy one where Miaka and Tamahome get married and have a baby, only yours would be so much better! I showed a portion of this to my friend, and she said she loved it cause you make Tasuki so cute and SEXY! (I already loved Tasuki before, but you know).

You are so awesome, and I worship you now! If you get this (oh god, i hope that you do), i beg that you email me so that i can tell you of your wonderfulness more... *wipes the crazed grin off her face* Really, you are excellent, though!!!

Shannon