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You said you welcomed constructive criticism, but I just can\'t think of anything to criticize. Maybe I\'ll be more critical in the next chapter and find a typo or a gramatical error or something...

Ha! I found some typos! Ya better go and re-read this to fix \'em.

I\'m impressed by how much detail you put into this and how in-character everybody is.

AWESOME!

Oh, it just gets better and better . . . please do continue. ^_^

You've got some good stuff going here Kitty!
My hat's off to you... or it would be if i was wearing on.
Please keep the fun stuff coming. I can't wait to see how you play this out. ;)

Great start to the third chapter! I thought it was sweet that Miaka is pushing herself to be more open with Tasuki even though it's totally against her nature. You did a good job with their conversation. Tasuki reacted like most men would to something like that, but he still takes her feelings under account. On the flip side, I liked the subtle way you showed his possessive, jealous side in the marketplace-it gave me goosebumps (the good kind.) That brings me to Chichiri *sighs* Poor man, can't he find someone, so everyone can be fulfilled and happy? Is a threesome out of the question? Hehe. I'm just joking. I just would like te eve everyone happy at the end- but I'm not worried. Something tells me you won't let Chiri suffer.

Your writing is so polished. Beautiful and descriptive too, I get caught up in every scene, whether it's funny, sexy or angsty. IF your other stories are like this one, I'd say Tasuki and Miaka are in excellent hands.

I will be checking back for the update. Can't wait!

Kari

MORE! I DEMAND MORE! How dare you stop this chapteW!!!W!!! PLEASE, I can't TAKE it!!!!

This is a great story, with very sexy and emotive writing. Really like the pairing the way you write it, but it's yin'yin' shame that Chichiri can't get a little lovin' too... ~v~
Hope you can update soon.

AHHHHHHHHH, you have to update that soon. this is written very well, one of the best i've read on here (if not THE best). i hope you update soon.

please finish this soon... i relly like the piaring... begging you, FATE GODDESS...