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by KittyLynne

person Silver1
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy Tasuki/Miaka pairings, so I was very happy to see this story. The only question I have is that I see its been updated, but this is still on the second chapter????? Since the basic story is still the same, I can only assume that the currect chapters have been revised. I am really loking forward to a new chapter...please update soonest!!! BTW REALLY REALLY liked the scene beteween Tasuki and Miaka...and no intercourse yet!!!
person HUANLANG
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HURRY UP AND WRITE ME THE BANDIT UP SOME HAPPY ACTION TIME FOR MY SENSUAL EDIFICATION THERE KITTY L, PUT THAT PEN TO PARCHMENT AND LET IT BURN YOU KNOW I LIKE IT HOT!!! YA KNOW PURFICALLY TANTILIZINGLY HOT!!! SO WHATS TAKEN YOU SO LONG GO GO GO!!!
person Mizu
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve always been fond of the Tasuki x Miaka pairing, and sadly, I never saw any exeptionally well-written fanfics . . . until I came across this one. And not only is it well-written--it has lemons, too! Anyway, this is excellent; the premise is interesting, and I like the dynamics of the relationship between Tasuki and Miaka. . . . And Chichiri thrown into the picture is just lovely. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. . . . Hopefully, Miaka\'s going to return the favor now? ^_^
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great story that\'s great and you\'ve got me hooked on. ^.^ Still waiting for the finish of Leather and Lace, the second story of the Promise, and now this. ...Well, your stories are so good I\'ll wait and be a good girl. *sigh* But I won\'t like it. I won\'t like it at all. ^-^ Please hurry up and finish.
I love your work. You are the best fanfic writer I have ever encountered. Hope you keep writing.

ForestMaiden

P.S. I do yahoo. You? Hevenly_Fox_Maiden (Just in case you want to be friends ^_^)

Later!
person Love Hime
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, that was really well written. Very sensual. I always liked the Tasuki/Miaka pairing, glad you do too! Write more!
person Kaede
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooweeeee...my eyeballs be sweating... @_@

this be a very hot story! please update soon!

Kaede
person TasMia
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In the immortal words of the nameless bandit of Leikaku--- I found you! LOL!!!!! I saw your mention of this fic in your ff.net bio so i had to come and check it out. Not really a fan of lemons, but this one is an exception. it\'s just a lovely story, and the way you write the intimate momentst between Tas and Mia is beautiful and romantic, not icky and vulgar. I felt really good after reading it--almost too good. ha ha too bad my fiance isn\'t here right now.... >:)
Keep up the great writing and we will see ya next chappie!

TML

PS. I am looking forward to your update on The Promise! YAY!!!!
person Knives
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0.0 I LOVED IT !!!!!!!!! SHOOO KAWAI!! I love the Tasuki/Miaka pairing!
Keep your little army who gives you ideas and add this next part you\'ve mentioned! I\'m putting this on my fav\'s page,
so make it worth my time or I shall have all the little plushie ns hns hunt you down and
type the whole next part themselves!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
person kuroi_hane
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHOO! aga again u\'ve out done urself! ur such an amazing author kittylynne! please please please update soon!! [and ur other fics on ff.net as well!] ^______^
person Tenshi Kitsune
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... you really are turning into a hentai no kitty! i like it! this latest chapter was fiery and passionate, kinda sweet at times and kinda funny too, but mostly just fiery hot! you write well normally, but for some reason scenes where emotions run high (ch20 of the promise that l&l chappy where dante and mia are alone at his place...) bring out the best in your writing. most amazing indeed. i want more soon! keep it up, kl! you\'re doing amazing!
~Tenshi Kitsune~

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