rate_review Reviews

This was very hot and totally amazing. >:) I got so wrapped up in the emotions and feelings, I had to stop reading it for a bit, it was that overwhelming. I\'m not surpised tho, since I\'ve seen that quality in your writing many times in The Promise, and Leather and Lace too. Your talent for engaging a readers emotions and making them care about your characters is second to none. Tasuki x Miaka rules!!!!!!!
Can\'t wait for the third chapter of Burned and for the updates on your other stories too, its been a long while!

cheers,
Desi

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the best, NO strike that the hotest sceen ive read ever!!!!! that was well it makes me do a happy dance seeing those two together. I belive that you are setting this up for a great story and i cant wait to read what else you have intore for use later on in the story.

Since I\'m not good at reviewing, the simplest word will be the best.

*licks lips* Delicious.

When is the next mouthful for? ~_^

Wow, KittyLynne! This is a lot different than what you have written on fanfiction.net, but it\'s so good! Poor Miaka, she needs some loving after holding out for so long, and Tasuki is just the guy to give it to her. You make their attraction so intense and real, and I can\'t wait to get to the next chapter to find out what happens so I will stop here for now.

cheers,
Desi

KL

This thing needs warning labels. I swear if the FDA got ahold of this you\'d be in big trouble.

Suggested warning labels:

Do Not Read While at Work (from the \'Scribe)
No Food or Beverages While Reading (could cause choking)
Keep Fire Extinguisher handy (using fire exstinguisher lightly....leave that up to your ecchi mind ^_^)
Best Read with a Partner ^_^

That\'s it off hand. I\'ll anxiously await the next installment. And heed my own warnings?

~SM~

T-T I almost started crying...I\'m not EXACTLY sure as to why that emotion came about but...i d\'no....-looks around for her boyfriend- where is that baka at when i need him the most T-T

Oh Lynne, this is an amazing fic, the way you describe their feelings, their actions...step by step...wow. Tamahome might be Miaka´s love interest, but I feel that Takuki should be the one for her. Great fic!!

Whoot! Second cha eve even better then the first! You truely have a flare for writing Tasuki/Miaka stories. As Oliver used to say \"I\'d like some more, please.\"

Oo la la...I like this story! As usual, you\'ve created a wonderful, spicy and captivating story! ^_^

I\'ll have to review again when I\'m in a more constructive mood. I\'m sure review isn\'t exactly helpful, but hey, makes ya feel good, doesn\'t it? *giggles*

Hmm... my only comment; in the line \"Of all the Suzaku seishi she’d have thought that Tasuki would miss her the least, given how he felt about w.\" .\" I disagree, as Tasuki mentions more than once that he doesn\'t see Miaka the same way he does other women...but it is your story, and it\'s wonderful and don\'t listen to me; just the fact that that\'s all I have to comment on should let you know that my first impression is a good one. ^_~

Anyway, keep writing, and I\'ll keep reading!

Love, A-chan

Fabulous job! I love where this is going. (I too, am a TasukiXMiaka fan! ^-^) It is a very well-detailed romance with much creativity. I can\'t wait for your update! Keep up the terrific work and good luck in writing future stories!