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for White and Green

by modernmouse

person AI
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know it\'s good because the pairing didn\'t make me cringe. ^^

I\'m a K/V (or V/K?) supporter, myself... so it\'s hard to read much else. But, this was beautifully written. Keep up the good work!
person nutmeg
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...and I mean wow...that was amazing. You should really write more like this.
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. When I read the pairing, I was like, this is just going to be shameless, ooc smut. It was not THAT ooc, actually... and very well done. ^.^
person Scrawl
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* well, that was strange. good though. poor Knives...he never /wanted/ to be a psycho, huh?
person Aneaniel
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I....love you? You are AWESOME girl! Oh my GOD! This is like...just WHOA! Mmmm this was NIIIIIIIIIICE! Write more my friend!!! -.- and CURSE Ff.Net for takin\' Musings down!!
person SpiritFighter
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O wow.... that was awsome in a strange way. I really liked it but I can\'t seem to explain why. How weird is that? But I REALLY liked it though. You have a real nice writing style.
person Kimbo
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s certianly OoC, but boy is it well written! Never really looked much at this particular pairing, but damn. You managed to deviate (sp?) from the characters set behaviour in a totally believable and interesting manner. Yet, they still maintain the basic patterns of behaviour. Knives using others for his own means, and Wolfwood being manipulated, even if he isn\'t complaining...;D

No lovey dovey man sex for this story, no way! It was also an interesting and successful change from your usual fare.
You rock.

I like the last minute lightening of the mood by the carpet reference. Got a smile from me.

*pestersannoyinglyforReflecupdaupdatei\'llleaveyoualonenow*

person Daniella Wisdom
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it ;3
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely imagery. It\'s a fabulous smut fic with a pretty pairing that wouldn\'t normally happen. Thank you for writing it.
person Yma
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... I\'m not swhatwhat else to say about it... but it\'s interesting. I liked the way you did Knives, even if this is a couple I can NEVER imagine realy happening. Sorry I don\'t have anything more positive to say. Nice writing, I\'m just not sure (personally) about the story. But this is just me, my tastes, others will and should tell you different.

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