rate_review Reviews

Can I be in this story

I absolutely loved this fic. From the internal politics of the band to the more subtle nuances of Taichi and Yamato\'s relationship--this story had me glued to my seat. Thank you muchly for sharing.

Good lord, that was... intense. I think Yamato was a touch too super-girly once or twice, but over all I liked it a lot. The writing was good, and the band was grand fun. A very erotic sex scene, and oh-so-kinky!

That was the best god damn story i\'ve ever read- and i\'ve read quite alot! Yamato / Taichi is one of my favoret pairings, and they way you portrayed the both of them was simply superb. The lemon was so friken hot- are you absolutly POSITIVE that was the end? I can plead for days for a sequil? *Gives you big puppy eyes* You must write more of this- and Yama fainting, *laughs* I just love your originality! The first chapter- too, was wonderful, how they got together. It was kinda funny how Soara just shoved her boyfriend out the front door and ordered him to go find Matt. They were\' menat to be together, damnit! Again, great story. This should win some kind of award...

that was very amusing, and the ending was damn hot. one simple thing that annoyed me throughout: \"itoushii\" you use it way too much and this is an english fic, not a japanese one. if you use it once or twice in a fic, when someone talk, it\'s not too bad. using it all over...? *grits teeth*

but all and all, i adored it, it entertained me and was really really hot. thank you!

~aion

This story is so good. I love the way you portrayed the band members and you have made the bits that are always suppossed to be interesting but never seem to reach that, entertaining. The sex scene is also really cool and very interesting. Keep writing and get the rest up soon please!