rate_review Reviews

I remember reading this back when it was on FF.net and I loved it so much. I'm glad to have found it once more.

Are you gonna add more to this, or no?

I liked it! One thing, though... try to use more varied adjectives. Avoid using the same one twice in a paragraph. Other than that, it was good!

eee~ soo cute. I love themmm ^_^

That was great!!! I loved it!!! Very clever, cute, and original -- keep up the good work!!!

Hey there! I was wondering when you were gonna write the pudding part. Is it completely written yet? *tired of waiting for an update* I hope you get done with it soon... Oh well, bug ya some other time then.

Yay for HaruxYuki yaoi! *gives much praise and cow plushies* I\'ve just recently watched Fruits Basket and Fell in love with Harusoonsoon as he appered *waits impatiantly for the manga to be translated* Bravo for an awesome fic! Wrtie many many more! *offers cookies*

You know, sometimes it\'s been a while, you need your fill of yaoi and you need it then and there. Most fics take at least 3 chapters of having a story before there\'s anything of the sort.

I like reading fic and love a story, but right now i just wanted some good yaoi. It\'s good because your story got right into it.

However, I would say that if you want to continue with it and make it a proper fic which you proof read etc. rather than just a small ficlet, I would suggest you write a bit for the start. Mainly tt tht the reader emotinally involved with the characters more.

Very good bit of writing though. I gave it a good rating. Well done.

hoo boy, have fun haru and yukito... *waves*
vute fic!

oooooh that was yummy, to all parties i am sure. i just love this pairing, they are so sexy. anywho i loved it, great use of cheese