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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a pretty cool fic...i really liked the storyline with it just being an \'evil eye\' dream and all that...neat plot twist!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHH!!!
For a while I was thinking, what the HELL? And then I got to the ending and it all made so much SENSE. Freaky sense, deeply emotionally scarred TERRIFYING sense, but sense nonetheless. Perfect title to match the fic, and a wonderful idea. Poor Ban.
For a while I was thinking, what the HELL? And then I got to the ending and it all made so much SENSE. Freaky sense, deeply emotionally scarred TERRIFYING sense, but sense nonetheless. Perfect title to match the fic, and a wonderful idea. Poor Ban.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intense...wow. Intense, sinfully dark and beautiful. I agree with Ban...why? Ginji seems really angsty, and I just wish that this wasn\'t the end...I wanted (and still do) to delve more into Ginji\'s reasoning and psyche. I think if you did a sequel, it would be really deep. Wel, if you ever need any help with fics, you have my addy. Ja ne! ^____^
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Though disturbingly detailed, it was also intriguing for the revelations near the end. I liked this idea. Great job with the description!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad.... poor Ban-chan... Poor ginji too.
hey you must make a seque any anything like that. Maybe you can explain WHY ginji wants to be hurt, is it because of what happened at Babylon? Or something with bex?bex?
Please make a sequel :)
hey you must make a seque any anything like that. Maybe you can explain WHY ginji wants to be hurt, is it because of what happened at Babylon? Or something with bex?bex?
Please make a sequel :)
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... suowerowerful emotion in it, and so sad. The ending, in a strange way was beautiful. Poor Ginji...T.T
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Simply thrilling; sensational descriptions. Poor Ginji-kun, he has so much guilt in him. I loved the twist at the end, that it wasn\'t actually Ban, but a \'dream.\' I could feel Ban\'s pain at having to put Ginji through that...very sad. I hope you write more, you have a wonderful way with words. Might I add, as a S/M fan...I also found this fanfic rather nice, and the parts of the torture you described were very fun.
Good work!
Good work!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was good keep up the great work...
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
;________;
That was SO good. It had a good plot too.... I reallly hope you continue with htis, it\'ll be in my favourites n.n
That was SO good. It had a good plot too.... I reallly hope you continue with htis, it\'ll be in my favourites n.n
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice! You really discribed it all right. Too bad that it\'s over.