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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*lol* That was funny. :D Bet Leon will be wondering what that ache is, eh? *hahahahaha*
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the story.
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup, I definitely loved this, although almost all the while I was making sympathetic whimpers for Leon. I know, I\'m sorry but I couldn\'t stop thinking about those, albeit beautifully so, very much manicured fingernails D has when he was stretching Leon.
Your general style of writing might use a bit more practice but the little quirks and characters were lovely. I\'m sure we all believe that the cream was spilled accidentally... Right? ;)
Your general style of writing might use a bit more practice but the little quirks and characters were lovely. I\'m sure we all believe that the cream was spilled accidentally... Right? ;)
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yaaat i love D/leon stories make another chapter!please?
love,
Sakura Miko Lee Setsu
love,
Sakura Miko Lee Setsu
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa! That went fast. It was pretty good, keep going
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your first fanfic and its a lemon, good job! I like the way it had D \"accidently spill\" whipped cream RIGHT ON LEON\'S CROTCH. It made me laugh and was a good segway into nice, lemony actions. GREAT JOB!!! You need to through a \"YAY!!! My first fan-fiction is finally done!!!\" Party with all of your yaoi-loving friends! Keep up the good work!!
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought you did a well catching their personalities (totaly dig a dominant D but I would think Leon would have needed a little more romancing/ seducing/coaxing into having a full on encounter with D. But then a PWP is about sex and their for no complaints should be cried)
I would love to see another chapter though ^-^;
I would love to see another chapter though ^-^;
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was funny. :) i love it when he says \"tyipical male\"
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
while this wasn\'t the best written, it was pretty good...
and I did like the ending.. leaves you wondering if it really happened or not. ;)
although with Count D\'s powers, the dreams seems to have a frightening real, soild subtance to it..
and I did like the ending.. leaves you wondering if it really happened or not. ;)
although with Count D\'s powers, the dreams seems to have a frightening real, soild subtance to it..
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you some one final made one and so me andvoicvoices in my mine thank you