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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I wouldn\'t have considered it his \'little mind\' just rather his \'little head.\' Something that he should consider putting a hat on. I thought that was reasonably well done, but it doesn\'t feel completed. You really should continue this. It has potential.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"great, she\'s banging the grass.\"
Hehe, well, you\'re definitely a great writer, Chad. I love your ability to describe and narrate the scenes so vividly. Not bad for a first-time smut fic :)
Very nasty cliff-hanger, might I add, by the way. Keep it up and you\'ll find yourself a few stalkers! Slight problem with the long paragraphs, but who am I to change your writing skills, eh?
Great job; keep it up and update soon!
Zoe
Hehe, well, you\'re definitely a great writer, Chad. I love your ability to describe and narrate the scenes so vividly. Not bad for a first-time smut fic :)
Very nasty cliff-hanger, might I add, by the way. Keep it up and you\'ll find yourself a few stalkers! Slight problem with the long paragraphs, but who am I to change your writing skills, eh?
Great job; keep it up and update soon!
Zoe
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice Work Shad. The Wolfman Likes Very much. What can I say I am a sucker for a nice redhead. Now I hope you let this really branch out add some great plot lines maybe a few bloody Digi battles. ^-^ Lol OTher than that great smut keep up the work
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! I hope you up soon!!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi shad.... I didn\'t read you story.... just wanted to tell you I hate you......and Shad no oishii shishou...... I hope you never find out what that means cause then I\'d die of embarassment..... so Ja ne
P.S. I know yur E-mail now.....^_^*peace sign*
P.S. I know yur E-mail now.....^_^*peace sign*