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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even though you last updated on 2004 I refuse to give up hope, because, maybe, someday, you'll keep writting this. I can't wait to know what happens, but I also know that good things come with time. So I will wait.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you do intend to continue with this fic, because it pretty much hooked up my interest. please update soon.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s an interesting beginning, but the main problem with the fic is that in the flashback, Sanzo really doesn\'t act like he\'s sixteen. Also, you spend a lot of time in exposition in the first chapter, which is really not such a good idea - you lose readers very quickly. It would probably be better to keep Sanzo\'s past a secret for now, and reveal the story of why he hates the rain only later. Instead, get on with what\'s happening in his life now, and have the secret about his past keep coming up and baffling the readers - and keeping their interest.
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was great. hurry and update soon!
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was....amazing.I hope you continue soon,as the suspense is completely unbearable.
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh pretty good so far. I don\'t read too many yaoi\'s but I think I will this one, this one has caught my interest indeed...Until next time! ^_^
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!
Impressive, is putting it mildly. Extremely well written. I can't wait for the rest of it!!!you've got real skill as a writter.I'm new to the fan fiction thing and it's becoming a pleasure I don't understand how I lived without. And Saiyuki is a fav anime of mine so it all fits into place. I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next installment. By the way,....if you have anything else posted anywhere else on this vast internet of ours mind sen me me word about it? I could a good read.
*evil grin*
Ja-ne!
Impressive, is putting it mildly. Extremely well written. I can't wait for the rest of it!!!you've got real skill as a writter.I'm new to the fan fiction thing and it's becoming a pleasure I don't understand how I lived without. And Saiyuki is a fav anime of mine so it all fits into place. I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next installment. By the way,....if you have anything else posted anywhere else on this vast internet of ours mind sen me me word about it? I could a good read.
*evil grin*
Ja-ne!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool, I saw your story on Fanfic.net and I just happened to see it here to. I’m glad to see there is an NC-17 version of this story.
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice! i saw this story on ff.net too, and i think this is a wonderful story! i love the fact that used the Fact that Goku was on LCDs for him to see Sanzo as his sun. really good! please tell me you\'ll update soon!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, just finish the fic! You\'re killing us here!