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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful a nice romantic story nice not enough of those on here plz make more i always knew they were gonna end up together beautiful
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ASDXS
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautyfull truely beautyfull....I hope too here more on this couple as time gose by....Maby something a little darker, or KINKY perhaps? Anyhoo loved the work...keep it up.
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH THAT WAS SO SWEET AND CUTE! OMG I LOOOOOOVVVVVEEEEE THIS STORY YOUR AN EXCELLENT WRITTER BE PROUD OF YOURSELF AND YOUR MAGNIFICENT STORY! IM GOING TO RE-READ IT OVA N OVA N OVA................................... YEA WELL IF YA EVER WRITE MORE OF THESE FICS PLZ E MAIL ME YOUR THE GREATEST BYEZ!
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man ya just got ta love this fic, very good, depicks emotion and exelent overal
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should do another van fionfiona. they make a good couple.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally some made a decsent Van/Fionna fanfic. this story was well writtren and long and thats the way i like em! two thumbs way up!!!!
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the fic and really love the lmon great job maybe you could come up with a new chapter you know how will thomas react to thier getting together?
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful... you could tell they were truely in love the way you wrote it. I know that feeling and you captured it perfectly. I hope you don\'t mind me saving it to my harddrive. Also, if you see this, maybe we could talk on IM or something sometime? But back to the story, beautiful, really.
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September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A nice little one shot, very sweet and very eto rto read! I enjoyed it thoroughly!