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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For a first r/nc-17 fic you\'ve done an amazing job. It was great. Very detailed.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great fanfic! I loved it! I loved the power struggle going on in Faye\'s head, sounds just like her. She and Spike were perfectly in character, I can see them using sex as a competition as well as a pleasureable experience. I love when things are kept in character. OOC\'s sometimes drive me insane. Very very nice story, don\'t worry about that. I give it five stars.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story . . .
Too bad you didn\'t make another chap . . .
Too bad you didn\'t make another chap . . .
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow amazing job on your first CB fic! It\'s great that I\indiinding all these great CB fics! Yours was exceptionally well written despite the fact that it is your first CB fYourYour writing style was absolutely amazing and I d Fad Faye\'s short thoughts. I even did what you said, read just the italicized thoughts, and then read just the story. It was cool I tell ya! Anyways, I hope you are thinking of writing another CB fic because you\'re really good at it!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, really beautiful
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omfg!!!!!!!!!
that was sooooo good x 10000000
me likey alot. please write some more of these wonderful fics.
*cookies will be given ^_~*
Ja ne
that was sooooo good x 10000000
me likey alot. please write some more of these wonderful fics.
*cookies will be given ^_~*
Ja ne
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great read. I loved this to pieces. Not only are the characters \"in character\", but it was written in a subtle style that merged seamlessly into the theme. I liked Faye in this story. Her musings and angsty love/hate for Spike ring very true. I love fan fictions where I can seethings happening for real in the story if the series went in that direction.
Kudos on a freakin\' major job.
Kudos on a freakin\' major job.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written! I\'d love to see more S/F fanfiction from you! Keep up the good work!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way you kept them in character. YOu also worked what was going on in her head and his very well.
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved it. it was poetic and packed an emotional punch very rare in casual sex fics. definitly do another story b/c if this one is anything to judge against, it will be a joy to read