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for Trapped Together Till Haloween

by LunaHope

person ~Moon-Daisuke
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best sm fics I\'ve read. I really enjoyed it. I just read all 8 chapters and could not have stopped if I wanted to. Keep up the great work and I will expect more great things from you. :)

~Moon-Daisuke
person Sailor Star Dust
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is now offically my FAVORITE Usagi/Mamoru H fanfic! ^_^
Luna Hope, you\'ve REALLY struck a chord with me with how you wrote this! IT\'S JUST TOO DAMN CUTE! WAI~ XD
I loved how you protaryed all of their personailties and I really liked what Minako said it at the end. ^___^ hehe, she was just too kawaii in this!
*The girls now begin to chase Minako around in a circle for her forcing them to do what they did*
With how you made Usagichan and Mamochan take things slow as well as at first just doing mutal mastrubation...I thought that\'s how they\'d act @ first, also! As far as their past lives...it really *does* make you think that something (read: having hot & wild sex :P) went out between them. I always figured Serenity got pregnant, too!
This was such a wonderful story, and it\'s also nice to know that there ARE sexual romance stories out there that aren\'t just all smut!
I happen to be a fanfiction author myself (though it\'s been \"clean\" stuff so far with 1 angsty fic that has slight limyness.^^;) so I really apperatie(spelling) your beautiful writing style! Please keep up the SUPERB work and take care! *bows with deep respect* www.fanfiction.net/~SailorStarDust1
person JaToya
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love it when I find a well written fic that actually has an ending. Congrats!

person C-town Chica
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is only like the 4th Sailor Moon fic I have read and it is by far the best one. I loved it. I am a DBZ fan but I found a Salior Moon story by one of my favorite authors and now I\'m hook. Great job and I can\'t wait to read more Sailor Moon fics by you.
Chica
person me
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
honestly, this is the best sailor moon lemon fic i have ever read. it really shows how much usagi and mamoru love each other... quite nice, maybe u shoul a s a sequel... showing how their love endures and maybe write about their wedding... if u do, make sure to add a lot of romantic touch like you did with this one
person me
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i forgot to say, maybe u should get someone to proffryouryour fic, there aren\'t many mistakes but they\'re still there, still, its okay because its just a technicality
person Deep Serenity
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Very Very good, Love the details in chap 3, cause yes she would need \"tampons\", I like realism.
person Deep Serenity
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice, that was sweet that he thought of her and waited, like this very much.
person Deep Serenity
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LAst two chap were excellent, I like all the little details and May I say that I am so glad that you had them be mad and so glad you played up Serena\'s attitude as a princess, because she really isn\'t goofy and stupid.

And yes they need to respect her, anyway loved it. I was very happy to read a good solid fic.
person Megan Consoer
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters.

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