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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT FIC
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT FIC
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD! Misao's pregnant!Will Aoshi find out soon?I'm assuming he IS the father 'cause he's the only one she slept with.I don't mean to make Misao sound like a whore 'cause I'm a really big fan of Misao and Aoshi,especially the fics.There's not enough of them out there,especially R and NC-17 rated fics. Arigatou!
JA NE!
JA NE!
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jin: Wow.
White Wolf: You said it.
Gin: This is one of those odd times when I agree with both of you. Anyway, I like your fic and I hope you write more when you feel like it.
White Wolf: Yeah. I know how you feel with people telling you to get your ass in gear and write more, even when you can\'t write more without making it crappy.
Jin: Yeah. It\'s hard to write when you just can\'t think of anything.
Gin: How would you know? You don\'t even write fics.
Jin: So? I write poetry.
White Wolf: Yeah, and it\'s crappy even when you CAN think of something.
Jin: Fuck you.
Gin: Ladies, be nice! Save the cat-fi for for after the review. Anyway, good luck writing more, and I hope you don\'t catch writers\' block or crappy-writing-itis from Jin.
Jin: Hey!
White Wolf: Good one Gin!
White Wolf: You said it.
Gin: This is one of those odd times when I agree with both of you. Anyway, I like your fic and I hope you write more when you feel like it.
White Wolf: Yeah. I know how you feel with people telling you to get your ass in gear and write more, even when you can\'t write more without making it crappy.
Jin: Yeah. It\'s hard to write when you just can\'t think of anything.
Gin: How would you know? You don\'t even write fics.
Jin: So? I write poetry.
White Wolf: Yeah, and it\'s crappy even when you CAN think of something.
Jin: Fuck you.
Gin: Ladies, be nice! Save the cat-fi for for after the review. Anyway, good luck writing more, and I hope you don\'t catch writers\' block or crappy-writing-itis from Jin.
Jin: Hey!
White Wolf: Good one Gin!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s going places =D
Don\'t worry about getting the mysterious Aoshi character down. I respect you for trying, let alone doing a good job of it :) Keep on writing. I\'m interested! I\'m interested! A note to the retarded flamers: Screw you all! >:(
Don\'t worry about getting the mysterious Aoshi character down. I respect you for trying, let alone doing a good job of it :) Keep on writing. I\'m interested! I\'m interested! A note to the retarded flamers: Screw you all! >:(
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, haven\'t seen you in a while. Cool update.
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great job!
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! I am also glad you didn\'t get discouraged by that reviewer. Also, thank you for dedicating the last chapter to me. I loved you last chapter. I especially liked the little infusion of playfullness in the lovemaking (you know, when Misao licked Aoshi\'s belly button). It gives a very human element to the lemon (tickling matches are fun too ^_^ ). I also thought the little spate of possessivneess coming from Aoshi (towards the end of the chapter) was really sweet. Oh, and I kind of like Karou as a flirt (great idea)!
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok i juss finished readin\' ur entire story, and i think thisa vea very original plot. dont get so upset \'bout wat sum reviewers said, u shouldnt make the chapters shorter. (that was complete bullshit) the fact that they are as long as they r shows ur putting effort into it. this story is awesum, i feel like im reading a script to a show. there\'s juss small things u could improve: i remember u said ur tryin\' t\' work on showin\' more emotion; a way u could do that is changing POVs, and say wat the person\'s thinking.
if u choose t\' do this please put sumthing to indicate ur doing so,(*blah blah* \'blah babble\') or else it gets confuseing\'. u hav great potential as a writer, and i hope ya keep going. PLZ POST MORE SOON, I LUV M/A PAIRINGS!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ DONT WAIT TOO LONG T\' UPDATE!! ~oo by the way nice lil lem ya got there ;)~
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ryoko-chan *^____~=v
if u choose t\' do this please put sumthing to indicate ur doing so,(*blah blah* \'blah babble\') or else it gets confuseing\'. u hav great potential as a writer, and i hope ya keep going. PLZ POST MORE SOON, I LUV M/A PAIRINGS!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ DONT WAIT TOO LONG T\' UPDATE!! ~oo by the way nice lil lem ya got there ;)~
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Dare I say great... yup! GREAT! I am so glad you updated, i have been missing this story greatlhankhanks Z.Z chan!