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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't even know this series, but this...is beautiful.
The relationship between these two is amazing and deep. I can feel it. The sex is hot, I love the S&M aspect. You really get hardcore and true on the S&M, with safe words and all that. Excellent.
I like how the vulnerability is revealed in both men, and yet one can still tell they are strong. And the fact that they're assasins? INtersting. That they don't usually get to show emotions like this? Very interesting.
For someone who has never written a lemon before, you did very well. this is some hot stuff. You didn't just describe who touched what, but waht they're feeling, WHY it's hot, etc. :D Awesome! I can't wait for the next installment!
The relationship between these two is amazing and deep. I can feel it. The sex is hot, I love the S&M aspect. You really get hardcore and true on the S&M, with safe words and all that. Excellent.
I like how the vulnerability is revealed in both men, and yet one can still tell they are strong. And the fact that they're assasins? INtersting. That they don't usually get to show emotions like this? Very interesting.
For someone who has never written a lemon before, you did very well. this is some hot stuff. You didn't just describe who touched what, but waht they're feeling, WHY it's hot, etc. :D Awesome! I can't wait for the next installment!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Loved the way Yohji drew his boundaries... and that he knew that Aya didn\'t understand the concept. Very erotic lemon -- it\'s all in the head, and Yohji knows it. Purrrr...
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That\'s great! I hope you will update this.
I love it!
I love it!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow... that was just WAY too fucking hot. you did an EXCELLENT job.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nummy....You\'ll prolly never see this cause this fic is so old, however I believe at starting at the beginning and working my way foward! LoL!
I really enjoyed your story...--pouts slight-- What ever happened to the next installment anyways?
Feel free to email me a response, but yeah, nummy nummy nummy!
Apollo
I really enjoyed your story...--pouts slight-- What ever happened to the next installment anyways?
Feel free to email me a response, but yeah, nummy nummy nummy!
Apollo
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just amazing. The emotions...
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read your story a while ago - liked it and that was it. But it came
popping back into my thoughts - problem was I couldn\'t remember where I\'d
found that little jewel.
So after some days of hard research: here I am and I\'m still amazed.
This story is well written. The characters are perfectly outlined and seem real - little ooc but
yes, real as in I can believe what you cooked up - totally.
You are a good writer - thanks for this.
Bye
ryushin
popping back into my thoughts - problem was I couldn\'t remember where I\'d
found that little jewel.
So after some days of hard research: here I am and I\'m still amazed.
This story is well written. The characters are perfectly outlined and seem real - little ooc but
yes, real as in I can believe what you cooked up - totally.
You are a good writer - thanks for this.
Bye
ryushin
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February 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Very smooth writing. Love Youji's character in this. Can't wait for more!
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February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.O
O.O
O.o
o.O
Holy ****! AH!
*stare stare stare, gawk!*
*In shock. Needs a shower now*
O.O
O.o
o.O
Holy ****! AH!
*stare stare stare, gawk!*
*In shock. Needs a shower now*
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February 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm new to this site and yours is the first I've read. And I must say that I will be checking back often to see if you've updated. I enjoyed what there was quite a bit. I tend to be into the kind of things you've written. Bondage, limits, and pain. Your story, well, the chapter was beautiful and touched the beast within me. Gods, the thought of Aya on his knees is enough to drive me nuts with want. Please write more soon!