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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a very good story. Author needs some practice in writing. The diaolgue is very bland "He said, she said, then this happened." Why does the author break in and put random comments in the story? It causes the reader to break away from the story.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahaha...