rate_review Reviews

I like this fic. I\'m looking forward for next chapters. Keep up the good work ^_^. Ganbatte ne.

I really like this - I\'m quite interested so far. However, I wish you wouldn\'t include so much Japanese. It\'s frustrating to have to scroll down and back up to find out what\'s being said, and it...uh...kind of comes across as showing off :x Sorry! But I think it\'d be better if you just wrote those things in English; it\'d be easier to read.

Your characterization looks fine, though! I hope you\'ll continue this.

well,,, it\'s a nice story... hope you\'ll update soon!!!!

This was exellent considering it was your first time writing for CCD. Your characterizations were very well done, especialy the characterization of Nokoru. The only thing I would change is the wording in one part, I forget wich sentence it\'s in, but at some point it says that Nokoru \"PURGED\" on. I think the word you were looking for was \"Plunged\" they sound similar, but have very diffrent meanings. Purge means \"to empty\" while plunge means \"to drop or dive.\" I appologize if you already knew this, but I thought I\'d point it out just in case you weren\'t a native english speaker. Other than that small problem I think the story was delightful and I can\'t wait to see the next installment.

I have to say this. I like the story so far, and that you have my fave paring out of Clamp School Detectives only makes it better. I hope to see you write more onto this story, and I\'m very glad that it is a story and not just smut. Though if you do decide to go into details, when you do the sex scene (She hopes between Sou, and Noru.), I wouldn\'t mind it in the least. :D Like the fic, want more! Ja bai









~~Raven

What the fucking hell??!! I\'m sorry, but I don\'t think your story is suitable in aff.net. THat\'s only for ff.net!! You see, this site is only for NAUGHTY and sex things!! Not some...bori"Nam"Namiko-something\"!! I like your story, but it\'s only for ff.net!!