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September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a very good story. very likeable too. wonderfully done . i love it. ^_^ also this is the first trigun fanfiction i have read.
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story, it almost made me cry. (thats saying alot) You two write wonderful stories. If you don't make a sequel i'll...i'll....cry. I really like the ideas behind your stories. Keep up the good work, yall.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, amazing stuff. Cant possibly say how much I enjoyed reading your fic!! One of THEE best Trigun fics I've ever read, hands down. Yes, to reiterate everyone's similar sentiments: Sequal please!!!! ^_^!
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As long as you make the sequel as beautiful as the first, if not moreso, I beg you to write it.
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had the words to describe how much I enjoyed this. Nothing I could say would ever do it justice. What you wrote... it is every hopeless romantic's dream come to vivid life. I can't even recall how many times I've tried to create a vision of this intimacy, only to fall so painfully short. This is the pure and total definition of "make love". I salute you.
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WASSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should really write more stories like this!!!!!
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O What a chapter!! I haven\'t the the full anime yet *keep missing eps. here and there*, but I think that Meryl and Vash should end up together, who knows? ;) Did you say you were planning a sequel, hmm??? Let me know when you do, I would LOVE to read it!!! ^_^
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! *falls on the ground and twitches* Please?!?! I generally leave a little more coherant reviews, but eh. This was an amazing story, and written well in the particular universe, and all the characters were spot on. What more can I say, but to beg for a sequal?
Much luv, and the most talkative of muses,
Natakamani
Much luv, and the most talkative of muses,
Natakamani
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good piece. I was very impressed that you were able to write the entire time without useing any real dialog. That must have been difficult. I am also very impressed how long you were able to draw out that foreplay scene. Good job! Make sure that you put that kind of skill to good use;). Keep writing, I like your stuff, and post again for the next chapter. (maybe use some dialog in the next one, if it fits with the theme that is.)
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK, I just left a thorough review for both your stories under \"Cold Comfort\", but I wanted to come over here to bump up your review count on this fic and to tell any readers who haven\'t already to get over to the other fanfic and read it too! Both are great and definately worth the read. Happy writing.