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for The Fate of a Broken Boy

by blue85lagoon

schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeas! They\'re together! Hehe. ^^ anyways, I liked how Tai told Ken he thought he was confused, not weak. Not to crazy about the KarixYolie coupling, but it was still funny when Tai let on he knew. ^^ But where\'s wormmon now? ^^;; Now for the next chapter.
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And so ends a story well done. ^^;; This was pretty good, and I liked the end. To be honest, I laughed when Ken made that request for Tai to be gentle, but it\'s understandable. And the thought of Tai watching Yamato and Jou was pretty funny. XD I especially liked the end how Ken was described. Good work. ^_~
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Taichi to the rescue! ^^;; Anyway, good ol\' Wormmon, always knowing Kenn so well. Characters still seem pretty much in character, and the story is excellent. But you left it with a cliffhanger! Oh well. I\'ll survive. Please update soon!
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... Poor Kenny-chan. ~huggles~ Man, the description sais TaixKen, but it seems more like DaisuKen. ^^;; Anyhoo, this is pretty good so far.
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You seem to be keeping the character pretty IC. Well done. ^_^ I\'m really enjoying this story. It\'s written really well. Well done. ^_^

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