rate_review Reviews

Congratulations! That's really I nice work, I like it. Please, update as soon as possible... or sooner, I wouldn't really mind!!! As for pairings, I'm all for Orphen/Majic, please, please, please let them be together. I also quite like Shamira, nice new character. Keep writing

Really, really good. I wasn\'t sure at first, but the first chapter turned out well. I also like the character, Shamira, right? I hope that\'s how it\'s spelled. Anyway, she\'s strong, pretty, and complex. Good qualities. Keep up the good work. And you MUST update soon! As for pairings, I am particularly fond of Orphen/Majic. Also, if you paired them up, you might consider it a challenge to pair Cleo with Shamira. Maybe it\'s just me, but I love challenges. If, however, you can\'t/don\'t write pairings like that, anything\'s fine! Don\'t care, just UPDATE! Please?