rate_review Reviews

hey...you should prolly repost this. it\'s a fave fic of mine, so i was trying to reread it, but it got all garbled and huge chunks of it are missing. anyway, i really like it and i wanna read it again, but i kinda can\'t right now.

that was the hottest thing i have ever read. omg. it was funny and just, guh. i loved how you write farfarello, it was perfect. i just hate it whent authors destroy his intelligence, but you didn\'t and guh, that was so hot. i crave more. i crave it so much i\'m reading it again.

\"Schuldig made sure his door was licked, braced the chair against it and for good measure blocked it with his dresser. \"

LOL Might want to fix that sentence, but the fic was an especially interesting readugh ugh a little predictable. ^^; I had a feeling it was Farf from the beginning. But I\'m weird-minded.

My suggestions.. would be something like...:

Make it completely unknowable who it could possibly be and seperate the fic into a few chapters. So Schuldig is more starts to have trouble trying to figure out who he has feelings for. Or something.

But all in all its good as it is, enjoyable, I think.

Fun and Sex - my all time favorite combination!!

Very well written - easy to read and meaning giving layout.

I love it when a writer takes care of what he/she is doing
- I see you take care a lot!

Hope to read some more of you soon

Jâ mata
ryushin