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for Pink and Tan

by modernmouse

person Akela
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no, what do they say? eh, it was good, with the lack of anything better to say. perhaps not as graphic as i wouldve liked...
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful ^_^
person Rae
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
n\'tn\'t be ashamed Miss Neko. The absense of a plot other than as a vehicle to get lovely bishounen naked and happy is often a wonderful thing. Many authors clutter thier fics with unnecessary plhat hat just confuses the reader. This story was a lovely little piece with everyones favorite bishounen, and please keep up the good work.
person Kimbo
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gee, if only everyone thanked me this nicely...:D

Wowie. Smut, yes, run of the mill- no. So much more vivid with imagery and colour. Pink and tan eh? I can see those colours now. So it didn\'t have a plot. Pffpht. It was great fun to read! So I give you a thankyou now! Much thanks. <3

I always enjoy your writings, always a pleasure.
person JadeBlade
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blush* *cough cough* Well, that was naughty...lol. Yet somehow it was still rather tasteful as lemons go. Sure it had no plot, but there is something to be said for a well written sone-shot lemon, also, and this did seem very well written to me. If this is how well you write in haste, then you are one hell of a writer! I\'ve enjoyed everything of yours that I\'ve read thus far!
person jayne
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fan-fucking-tastic. Really, i mean it. ^.^ i only have one question: is Vash\'s gun-arm waterproof? ;)

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