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for Endymion

by intervigilum

person Megan Consoer
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters.
person Some Loser
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"But more importantly, he wondered if that room in that apartment across the city, if Robin dreamed of him night after night, as well.\"
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Well? Does she? Egad, we need to know!
person Serenity
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I\'m not sure I can find the right words for that amazing piece of literature... It was so well-written and sensual to the point of absolute insanity, you truly are a master. Thank you so much for writing this work!
person Gothic Butterfly
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like the way you write, this story was amazing. Are you thinking about adding another chapter? Because I think you should, I would really like to read more. ^_^
person tinytim10
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to update this story...continue it...whatever! It is sooooo goood! I love it! Especially the lemon! He took it, step by step and slowly...too bad it was only a dream!
person Lady Blackmour
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Egads! That rocked! No, really, it was so good...the smut was very sexy, but at the same time very sweet, which in my opinion is the very best kind. But I hate to think it ends here! What *is* Robin dreaming of? Any chance we could get her dream as well? Or...even better...something *real*!?

Yours,
The Lady of Blackmour
person Poppy
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t care what anybody says, AmonxRobin fics rule! =D This is definitely THE best lemon fic (or fic, period) I have ever read in a long time, which is a big deal for me. It\'s rare to find something this good these days. Awesome delivery, beautiful description and the characters where totally themselves. If you write another fic, it can\'t be soon enough. Kudos! :)
person Cail
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is there another chapter? please let there be another chapter
person Nyx
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think everyone is in agreement that a shrine to be erected to you and your absolutely undeniable Skillz. Not skills, but Skillz. I thought I was going to die about six times through this - more than just great and really hot sex, it _sounded_ like them. Every minute you kept reminding me exactly what characters I was reading about, lingering on their ways of speaking and their personalities, which is easily one of the most important parts of good sex scenes. I couldn\'t slot any other characters in their place; this is purely Amon and Robin. She was sweet and inexperienced but her own level of quiet calm still showed through - for all her immaturity, she didn\'t start screaming and running from the room. I think _I_ might have, \'cause a turned on hot-as-hell Amon is just - intimidating. Scary, really. But too took it very well. And thank you GOD but you didn\'t portray Amon as some cold hardened killer; he\'s stony but not _made_ of stone. The consideration he showed Robin blew me away. It really was nice - this is how everyone should treat virgins, you heartless narcs. Almost took away from the fact that he commited statuatory rape and yes, he has fucked up _royally_ . . . but fortunately, in his own head. And hopefully, in real life, because we\'re all shameless like that and this was really, really very good.

I\'m going on like this because this is one of the few _good_ sex shorts I\'ve read in years - and this includes some of that published malarky. This was realistic and touching - although it could have used a condom. That would push it into perfection. But, ultimately, wet dream. Damn. Poor Amon. No wonder he\'s such a bastard, all the torture he goes through every night.

I\'ll go with the majority and say MORE! MORE, damn you!
person Debra Thurlby
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. Are you going to write another chapter to this story? If no, I hope you make more AmonXRobin fanfiction.

The story was great!

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