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for Endymion

by intervigilum

person Dawn
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my, goodness! You have talent! Yes you do, and by the way, that was the best *lemon* (=B) ever! Please please please, make a sequel, like, oh, i don\'t know, that actually happening! :) you\'re so great at this- -bows and kisses your feet- more more more! :)
person XXX Lady Kagome
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Does Robin dream of Amon?!?!?! Nice story, I love the details! What about Robin?
person Raenef
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Amazing lemon. I have never seen something so detailed. Most people don\'t realize how naive and immatureginsgins are at sex, but you got it done perfectly.
person alicia
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man that was great...very exciting
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! Very nicely written.
I must compliment you on several points. Firstly, on how well you captured (and stayed true) to the characters throughout the piece. Secondly, thank you for not rushing the story. If it had developed at any other pace, I\'m afraid that it would have too easily become just another average sex fic. Instead, I found it wonderfully vibrant and erotic; the descriptions of both feelings and actions making it easy to become aborbed by it.

Thank you and please consider writing more.
person Chrissy E E
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a very extreme pov of Amon\'s dream but i really really liked it. Although it did seem kinda waffy, what elevater where they in ? the 1 at STN-J or at robins apt.? any way very good story. i totally liked it. ^_^x
person Chrissy E E
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah did i forget to mention that this story totally rocked. it was also wonderfully written, im still fanning myself off.
oh yeah what dose Endymion mean?
i cant wait to read what u have 4 Robin\'s dream of Amon. ^_^x
person Nikita
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Oh.

This just made me purr.

You\'ve got Amon and Robin down to a damn \'T\' and... I obviously still need a moment to recover. *g* Beautifully crafted, and enough sexy real smut to melt Antarctica.

If you write more, I\'d be your slave forever. Which may not be as desirable as it sounds, since I come along with a precocious infant, but still... ummm... pretty please?

With naAmonAmon on top?

Would (obviously) love to see more WHR, and I love all your other stories too, and rev review each one if you want pitiful mewlings. *G*

Thanks for writing this.
person Nikita
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pardon me while I laugh my ASS off at myself.

This is your *only* story... obviously I shouldn\'t attempt to write anything at three a.m. *blushes*
Got here via a recommended reading link and didn\'t realize it. I just needed to correct my error so I didn\'t sound like a moron. Well... a complete moron, anyways.

Might I add, what a damn shame this is your only story. :)
person Soranji
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I hope there is more... Its too good not to have more..

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